| "Then and Now" Reviews/Comments [ 56 ] |
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Reviewed By: Phalon22 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2005 01:14 CST
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Totally kewl. Though gross on Inuyasha & Kikyou's part. This is a really great story. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2005 09:48 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT !!! I CAN'T WAIT TILL THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Unreal
Reviewed By: kikitravel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2005 12:43 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't think you put a lot of thought into this fic. Afterall, who would go blurting about that they are a demon or travel through time? And especially to a stranger! You think that they would some SOME restraint in keeping it a secret. Aiya...
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Reviewed By: tbiris(not logged in) On: February 06, 2005 18:11 CST
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cute, I liked that line where he said I found you didn't I? ^^
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2005 16:52 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Luv the fic, update soon. I can't really think of much to say sorry. ~~Kuramas Gurl~~
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Reviewed By: Night Ember (not logged in) On: February 06, 2005 13:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a good fic and the only reason the enjoyment is on nine is because how short it is! I hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: kaja1234 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2005 13:59 CST
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i really hope you update soon, this is a very good fic!
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Reviewed By: Kat_Sakura On: January 22, 2005 03:28 CST
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pllz update soon...... pweatty pweatty pwease with everything sweet on top... i cant wait to read more of the story... ^^
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Title: ^__^
Reviewed By: Living_In_A_Dream [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2005 22:52 CST
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I WUBBED IT!!! your a really good writer!! please update soon!! -Aya-
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Reviewed By: Night Ember [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2005 21:16 CST
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Much Better! but i do wish you could make them longer! *fake sob* anyways, just telling you that you are doing so much better now and i love it so far! cant wait to see Inuyasha's and the gang's reactions! hmmm...how many things could happen back then...lol. hope to read from you again, and i hope you could take the time to read my stories! but if you dont, i will still review. I just wish you would, though!
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Title: Comments
Reviewed By: Night Ember [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2005 03:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think you could use improvement. your story idea and way with words are very nice, but your typing lacks that finess. try typing in paragraphs when not talking or having a mental conversation. when you do that try adding a space between the people speaching and the next unless they cut them off or something. dont get me wrong, i like your story and i have added it to my aol favorites! i just think your writting needs improvement, along with the sizes of your chapters! if you know you wont be typing for a while, write an Extra long chapter. or when you cant update for a while, when you get the chance, make sure the chapter is long! this will get you on more readers good side. I love your idea as i have said before, but i just wish you could make them quicker and longer! -*lip quivering with puppy dog eyes*-. hope you dont get mad at my critisim! if you want my help or something just email me at Celestral4000 at aol.com! thank you for reading this lenghty review, and for maybe thinking about what i said. (please read my stories. i know a lot of people probably ask you this, but it would be nice. just keep in mind that my spelling is horrible! thank you again for thinking about reading any of my stories! ^-^)
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Reviewed By: Ryukotsusei [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2005 00:11 CST
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good story, can't wait for future chapters please update soon
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Reviewed By: inuyasha92689 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2004 23:26 CST
Comment/Review:
OMG i love this story it's great you have got to update it realy soon ok thanks tootles. ~Ris~
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Title: ihatepurplemonkeys
Reviewed By: ihatepurplemonkeys [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2004 16:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great fic!i think that,even though yus/kag is my fav pairing,you should continue makeing this a kur/kag fic cause its obvious thats what you were gonna do anyways.its cool how you did all of that though.very creative as you can see.*eh eh?:-P update soon please!
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Reviewed By: the beauty behind the mask [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2004 17:02 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice keep writing up its interesting update soon!
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