| "Mission in America" Reviews/Comments [ 59 ] |
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Reviewed By: AMK [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2004 11:59 CDT
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Of course I'm reading it. It's mindless humor. I love it! ^^ Thanks for using my suggestions! *snicker* Hiei can't reach the Cheerio's... bwa ha. It's so much fun to make fun of short people. Like my sister. Well, yeah, it was short. But hey, length doesn't matter as long as you update!
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Title: cool
Reviewed By: kasumi the vampire queen [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2004 22:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was very interesting, you did a very good job on it.^_^.
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Title: OH MY GOD!!
Reviewed By: MuriKyono-san [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2004 00:20 CDT
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Are you a... A... A reviewer? Blink, blink. You\'ll figure out the mystery girl soon! Just for REVIEWING I will fulfill your request! I was going to stop on this fanfic, but it seems people actually are reading it!
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Reviewed By: AMK [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2004 22:08 CDT
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.... who's Yusuke trying to fix Yugi up with? o_O0 Not- Botan? *twitch* BAD MENTAL IMAGES! *twitch twitch* All right, I've recovered. Hee hee- Genkai has boys fighting over her. ^^ She was really hot when she was younger though, seriously. Right, back to the fic- ahem. Yusuke's PS2 got broken! Ha ha ha. He plays too many video games anyway. I'm surprised that his brain hasn't melted to the aproximate consistency of a slushball and dripped out of his ears by now. o_o That sounded cool. Have Hiei or someone say that to him in the next chapter. There will be a next chapter, right? And it'll be soon, right? *wink wink nudge nudge*
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Reviewed By: MuriKyono-san [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2004 00:38 CDT
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I will be sure he gets your delivery. ^^ I am so sorry I haven't updated in a while, and DARN ME I did NOT reply to this review right away. MY LIFE IS OVER!! I WILL NEVER HAVE A HAPPY MOMENT AGAIN!! I- Er... Sorry you had to witness that. I will definetely get back to work immediately... Immediately after I read a little 8-bit Theater by Brian Clevinger (if you mix around the letters in his first name, it spells Brain. Is that not incredibly wacky? ^_^ It can be viewed at http://www.nuklearpower.com by the way.)
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Reviewed By: AMK [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2004 16:53 CDT
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THIS IS SO FRICKIN- weird. But funny! ^^ No plants? Awww- poor Kurama. Send him some roses from me. ^^ He's so cute.
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Reviewed By: MuriKyono-san [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2004 14:30 CDT
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Thank you for correcting my spelling. I'm not a big Yu-Gi-Oh fan. ^_^ And yes, I will be introducing more characters along the way.
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2004 00:02 CDT
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One thing: it\'s Tea, not Taya. I look forward to having the plot arrive soon! Question: Are more people gona come? (Touya, Jin, Yami, etc?) I hope so. Ok, on with the random stuff!
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Reviewed By: MuriKyono-san [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2004 15:15 CDT
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I realize that the story may be all over the place about now, but I suggest checking back after a few updates. Eventually a story will form. It's not good to read a page of a book a day, and there's no difference with this fan fic. You'll just have to wait until things fall into place. But until then, please enjoy the extreme stupidity. I like the stupidity. It's stupid. It's so stupid it's stoopid.
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Reviewed By: DarkGatomon, the Kuroneko Yajuu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2004 00:54 CDT
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Wow. That seems like something that was supposed to be a parody, but really just kinda... failed. I read it just because I found its stupidity pretty funny, too. But I guess that's a pretty thin line, isn't it? And it seems like some other people thought of it as a parody. It was just way too random for my style. *shrugs* If you like it, though, do as you will!
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Reviewed By: MuriKyono-san [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2004 22:15 CDT
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Trust me: A story will form soon enough. But first I'm gonna go all silly and use words like "giddy" and "spiffy." And then the story. And I recently changed the summary to include a short sentence about how much Kurama and Hiei I will be showing to get more viewers. Silly fangirls. Trix are for Kuramas. Bludz are for Hieis. Gunz are for Yusukes. Swordz are for- Well, you get the idea.
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2004 07:46 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
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I really enjoyed this even thiugh it appears fairly plotless, though I bet the plane got pretty unpleasant with all those heads rolling around. I am looking forward to the next installment.
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Reviewed By: MuriKyono-san [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2004 02:50 CDT
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As you wish, O mighty reviewer. XD
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Reviewed By: lizzie121279 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2004 22:35 CDT
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Make the YYH crew meet the other YGO characters. I want to see how they will react to them!
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Reviewed By: MuriKyono-san [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2004 17:55 CDT
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Sorry about the format. I'll try to fix it. ^^;;
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