| "Mission in America" Reviews/Comments [ 59 ] |
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Title: cool
Reviewed By: kasumi the vampire queen [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2004 22:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was very interesting, you did a very good job on it.^_^.
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Title: OH MY GOD!!
Reviewed By: MuriKyono-san [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2004 00:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
Are you a... A... A reviewer? Blink, blink. You\'ll figure out the mystery girl soon! Just for REVIEWING I will fulfill your request! I was going to stop on this fanfic, but it seems people actually are reading it!
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Reviewed By: AMK [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2004 22:08 CDT
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.... who's Yusuke trying to fix Yugi up with? o_O0 Not- Botan? *twitch* BAD MENTAL IMAGES! *twitch twitch* All right, I've recovered. Hee hee- Genkai has boys fighting over her. ^^ She was really hot when she was younger though, seriously. Right, back to the fic- ahem. Yusuke's PS2 got broken! Ha ha ha. He plays too many video games anyway. I'm surprised that his brain hasn't melted to the aproximate consistency of a slushball and dripped out of his ears by now. o_o That sounded cool. Have Hiei or someone say that to him in the next chapter. There will be a next chapter, right? And it'll be soon, right? *wink wink nudge nudge*
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Reviewed By: MuriKyono-san [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2004 00:38 CDT
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I will be sure he gets your delivery. ^^ I am so sorry I haven't updated in a while, and DARN ME I did NOT reply to this review right away. MY LIFE IS OVER!! I WILL NEVER HAVE A HAPPY MOMENT AGAIN!! I- Er... Sorry you had to witness that. I will definetely get back to work immediately... Immediately after I read a little 8-bit Theater by Brian Clevinger (if you mix around the letters in his first name, it spells Brain. Is that not incredibly wacky? ^_^ It can be viewed at http://www.nuklearpower.com by the way.)
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Reviewed By: AMK [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2004 16:53 CDT
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THIS IS SO FRICKIN- weird. But funny! ^^ No plants? Awww- poor Kurama. Send him some roses from me. ^^ He's so cute.
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Reviewed By: MuriKyono-san [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2004 14:30 CDT
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Thank you for correcting my spelling. I'm not a big Yu-Gi-Oh fan. ^_^ And yes, I will be introducing more characters along the way.
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2004 00:02 CDT
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One thing: it\'s Tea, not Taya. I look forward to having the plot arrive soon! Question: Are more people gona come? (Touya, Jin, Yami, etc?) I hope so. Ok, on with the random stuff!
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Reviewed By: MuriKyono-san [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2004 15:15 CDT
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I realize that the story may be all over the place about now, but I suggest checking back after a few updates. Eventually a story will form. It's not good to read a page of a book a day, and there's no difference with this fan fic. You'll just have to wait until things fall into place. But until then, please enjoy the extreme stupidity. I like the stupidity. It's stupid. It's so stupid it's stoopid.
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Reviewed By: DarkGatomon, the Kuroneko Yajuu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2004 00:54 CDT
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Wow. That seems like something that was supposed to be a parody, but really just kinda... failed. I read it just because I found its stupidity pretty funny, too. But I guess that's a pretty thin line, isn't it? And it seems like some other people thought of it as a parody. It was just way too random for my style. *shrugs* If you like it, though, do as you will!
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Reviewed By: MuriKyono-san [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2004 22:15 CDT
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Trust me: A story will form soon enough. But first I'm gonna go all silly and use words like "giddy" and "spiffy." And then the story. And I recently changed the summary to include a short sentence about how much Kurama and Hiei I will be showing to get more viewers. Silly fangirls. Trix are for Kuramas. Bludz are for Hieis. Gunz are for Yusukes. Swordz are for- Well, you get the idea.
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2004 07:46 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
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I really enjoyed this even thiugh it appears fairly plotless, though I bet the plane got pretty unpleasant with all those heads rolling around. I am looking forward to the next installment.
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Reviewed By: MuriKyono-san [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2004 02:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
As you wish, O mighty reviewer. XD
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Reviewed By: lizzie121279 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2004 22:35 CDT
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Make the YYH crew meet the other YGO characters. I want to see how they will react to them!
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Reviewed By: MuriKyono-san [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2004 17:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
Sorry about the format. I'll try to fix it. ^^;;
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