| "Reflection in the Water" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
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Reviewed By: kieran On: March 08, 2005 13:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think your story is great but i can't find the rest of it on FanFiction.net. i'll have to find it on the other site. finish the story soon.
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Reviewed By: flygirl 13 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2004 19:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
it's me again and i'm soooo happy you finally updated i luv this fic plz update soon again
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Reviewed By: akami-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2004 17:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a really good fic, just spelling and grammar need a bit of work. Also, try figuring out a way to put details in rather than simply stating them. Like when your describing the room, or something. Maybe it would sound better with better grammar and spelling, too. But, that's about it, otherwise, it's great!
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Reviewed By: I AM CANADIAN On: August 09, 2004 01:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I woulda gave u a 9 n a half but its nt in the rating thing yer a great writer and i can't wait till da next chapter so up[date soon k? THANX !!^_~!!
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Title: great story
Reviewed By: Mirokus_gurl10 On: August 04, 2004 09:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
You're a great writer. I loved spirit away. i can't wait to read chp 4
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Reviewed By: Gabbeyboy On: July 29, 2004 20:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you write magnificently! Im really, really looking up to the next chapter. you should write a book!
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Reviewed By: sunnygirl On: July 21, 2004 15:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooohhhhh, that was so good! you better start the next chapter soon, please, Please?!! I love your story. I only think Chihiru should be younger, like thirteen or something.
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Reviewed By: whiterose On: July 07, 2004 00:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW, so good. I can't wait until you update. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: inumaru12 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2004 10:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh that was good i cant wait for chapter 4 i cant wait plz hurry!
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Reviewed By: flygirl 13 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2004 17:10 CDT
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this is soooo awesome plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz pl plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz update really really soon it is sooo awesome i luv it
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