| "Dark Castle" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: l33t On: August 18, 2004 18:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Updatee, i beg of thee!!! T.T
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Reviewed By: aurelia0820 On: August 10, 2004 13:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
OMG I just love your fic plz update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: Thornwitch On: July 06, 2004 22:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
Would you PLEASE stop spelling vial (something that holds liquid) as vile (something gross) -It's really distracting. And what does Inu-yahsa's mask look like? I actually missed that he was wearing it until he took it off. Oh, and I think you mean "all enveloping" not "all consuming" to describe it.
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