Reviewed By:raven_aj [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2008 09:31 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review: Good story but quiet a few errors like in chapter one you wrote that Van's father had died when he was younger. a few times you said Amy when people were talking/thinking Van's ex-wife. any way its a really good story and I enjoy reading it. Keep up the good work
Reviewed By:CloudDragon19 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2007 20:47 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10