| "Cohesion" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: little_white_kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2008 01:43 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Most definately a beautiful and worthy sequel. ^_^ I would love to see you write the birth of the pup, but I completely understand where you're coming from on the "bolts of inspiration, only" problem, heh. Congrats! You have been officially added to my Favorite Authors list! =D Keep up the amazing work!
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Title: ex
Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2007 15:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved both stories. Excellent work.
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Reviewed By: Kagome0820 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2005 09:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great sequel! Most usually mess up the orginals but this one was great. ^__^ ::Smile:: Write more -Kagome0820
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Reviewed By: Mimiko (who should probably sign in) On: August 17, 2004 12:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm with Inu-Yasha...those doctors aren't the smartest people in the world...but Kagome's right! Pregnant women need to be sexed up! I loved this story, and I loved Convalescence. To quote myself, back when I read my first lemon, "Your lemons flow better than lemonade!" Oh, to be twelve again... I usually don't like sequels; they're rarely done well. However, I love how you actually tied up the loose ends, -and- started a new storyline, without hurting the quality of the story. If anything, I'd say the sex was better this time... I understand that you can't pump out lemons like a machine...but should inspiration strike you again, I do hope it's in the form of hentai. I think others will agree with me when I say that it would be a very good thing.
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Reviewed By: Milady Goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2004 11:43 CDT
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This is really good, I thought it was so funny with little Inu being so worried... And I hope you countinue, write more about the 8 months to go and when the pup comes and so... Well, great work...
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Reviewed By: Haisha-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2004 17:02 CDT
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Wow! Most authors can't pull off good sequels, so be proud!! This is such a great follow-up to Convalescense. I really really hope to see more from you very soon ^_^
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Reviewed By: ME On: July 09, 2004 22:19 CDT
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Great little 'follow-up' to 'Convalescense' ^_^ Poor Inu with all his worries and poor Kagome!! One should never be sex-deprived when first mated!!--make anyone a little grumpy!!
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Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2004 01:54 CDT
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*peeks around * hi...i kinda like Seshomaru...umm...i was wondering...if you would ...ya know...meby write him into this...like...*ducks then peeks out again* what he might do about his 'impending' nefew/neice?
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Reviewed By: Zelix [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2004 19:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa, i've read both Convalescence and this one, shit, you're good! That encounter with Kouga, the fears Inuyasha had and love scene... god, i think i cried... and i'm a guy, and i cried.. damn, if you ever write more stories, i'll read them with enthusiasm!
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Title: YAY ^^
Reviewed By: Little_Tennyo (Do I ever login?) On: July 03, 2004 05:51 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've red "Convalescence" first before I strted to read this one. And I LOVE IT! Your really good at this you know that?! I hope you make more ficcies soon! Maybe a Sango/Miroku as well ^^ *angel face* Well just wanna say that I love it! And keep up the good work! bubai K!$$ and Love ~ Little Tennyo
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