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Reviewed By: Caitlebug [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2008 21:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is one of the best I've read. It was just truly amazing. The atmosphere, the complexity of characters and of their interactions...fantastic. You blunted nothing, which made it just that much greater. I do love those fluffy stories of easy love and hot sex, but you can only take so many of those. This story had texture, told of real, harsh life, and an ending so very morose and right. I adored your depiction of Yohji as the intellectual pretend-smart ass, taking his blows with a smirk on his face. And Aya I found refreshing, as many depict him as secretly submissive and shy (not that that's not good :)). He was rough, unforgiving, aggressive, and relentless. Death comes to all of us eventually, at least they went out together, finally with a peace of mind. Thank you for writing something that seems actually tangible. I look forward to other writings.
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Reviewed By: El Chupacabras [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2006 20:31 CDT
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I really like the story. The entire atmosphere was excellent. And the end was appropriate. I truely enjoyed this a lot.
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Reviewed By: weisslover27 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2005 11:13 CST
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That was very good. You really couldn't put another ending to the story, Yoji wouldn't be very happy to have to live without his um..manhood..yeah that'll work. Excellant Job, although I would request a "happy fic" next time..maybe Brad getting his tallwacker wacked off..lol :-0 Thanks again Ally
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2005 17:11 CST
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okay so i've been a little bit mean, i've been dying for you to update this fic, and then you did, and then i never reviewed...part of it was i was too lazy to sign in and review and the other part was that i honestly didn't think that this was going to become a deathfic...don't get me wrong, it works...but i was hoping for a happy fic......so i suppose i'll be the only person who wouldn't mind the alternate ending you said you might write
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Reviewed By: abyssinian_assassin [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2005 14:40 CST
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I think you should add an alternate ending as well, it would be a nice change. Though, I did love this story as it ended anyways. Good job, keep it up. ^-^
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Reviewed By: gothria [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2005 03:45 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so good, but so sad. I felt so bad for Yoji through the whole story. I think you should write another ending, I was hoping that they'd make it out alive together, but oh well.
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2005 20:19 CDT
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love your fics generally...i must admit i love yohji aya pairings and i find this one is good even with just a hint of their relationship...can't wait for an update (hint hint)
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Reviewed By: RedQueen [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2005 13:52 CDT
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intriguing. very, very intriguing. i've read a lot of your weiss fics and i think this one is my favorite. or would be, if it continued! i see in the story info that it's "completed", but i hope that's not really the case. WAY too many loose ends. one thing -- in chapter 3, yohji says he had to be 'observative' to be a P.I. as far as i know, there is no such word; i think you mean 'observant'. i know, i know, grammer corrections from someone who doesn't bother to capitalize when typing...anyway, i really hope you plan to continue this story, as it is definitely gripping.
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Reviewed By: weisslover27 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2005 15:44 CDT
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I read this awhile ago but never reviewed..Bad fan..Please continue. Thanks. Its a really intriging story
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Reviewed By: visitor On: April 23, 2005 19:34 CDT
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An exceptional fanfic that actually had an interesting plot. The bloody cruel scenes seemed very personal and I couldn't help but feel pity for Yohji. I'm anxious to find out what you have for us next. Thanks for sticking true to the characters personally and keep those fingers typing!
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Reviewed By: dimonyo-anghel On: March 16, 2005 21:34 CST
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grrr stupid crawford!! did he rape yohji to because it doesnt really say it but it might have hinted stuff i didnt notice! and mann no more yohji nagi conversations! stupid ran and aya to!
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2005 20:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Confirmation of what Yohji did that Ran might find unforgiveable, and at last Yohji is free from Schwarz -- but I shudder to think of what Crawford did that Schuldig found sickening. It's getting hard to see how there could be something of a happy ending to this story, but I will hope for one anyway. I loved Yohji's strength of character as shown in his retained sense of humor. Well done, and please come back soon with more.
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Reviewed By: dimonyo-anghel On: February 26, 2005 21:43 CST
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whats brad doing to hot and totally cool yohji!??! and yay go nagi yohji friendship!
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2005 15:40 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful story! I love the way Yohji's sense of humor even in the midst of all the terrible things happening to him. Once again, Nagi's role as a confident works beautifully, and it was great learning quite unexpected things about Yohji's past (although his intelligence was shown from time to time in the series). But a cliffhanger -- what the heck is Crawford doing to him now?! Who was it that Yohji killed, and her relationship to Aya (oh, how I fear)? I hope Aya and Weiss show up soon, Yohji is in great need of a rescue, and resolution with Aya. Please come back soon.
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Reviewed By: gothria [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2005 02:31 CST
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shit. yoji's having a really really fucking shitty time. i feel really bad for him. hope his good karma kicks in soon...and that you write more soon =^~=
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