| "Smile in Regret" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2005 20:19 CDT
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love your fics generally...i must admit i love yohji aya pairings and i find this one is good even with just a hint of their relationship...can't wait for an update (hint hint)
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Reviewed By: RedQueen [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2005 13:52 CDT
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intriguing. very, very intriguing. i've read a lot of your weiss fics and i think this one is my favorite. or would be, if it continued! i see in the story info that it's "completed", but i hope that's not really the case. WAY too many loose ends. one thing -- in chapter 3, yohji says he had to be 'observative' to be a P.I. as far as i know, there is no such word; i think you mean 'observant'. i know, i know, grammer corrections from someone who doesn't bother to capitalize when typing...anyway, i really hope you plan to continue this story, as it is definitely gripping.
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Reviewed By: weisslover27 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2005 15:44 CDT
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I read this awhile ago but never reviewed..Bad fan..Please continue. Thanks. Its a really intriging story
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Reviewed By: visitor On: April 23, 2005 19:34 CDT
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An exceptional fanfic that actually had an interesting plot. The bloody cruel scenes seemed very personal and I couldn't help but feel pity for Yohji. I'm anxious to find out what you have for us next. Thanks for sticking true to the characters personally and keep those fingers typing!
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Reviewed By: dimonyo-anghel On: March 16, 2005 21:34 CST
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grrr stupid crawford!! did he rape yohji to because it doesnt really say it but it might have hinted stuff i didnt notice! and mann no more yohji nagi conversations! stupid ran and aya to!
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2005 20:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Confirmation of what Yohji did that Ran might find unforgiveable, and at last Yohji is free from Schwarz -- but I shudder to think of what Crawford did that Schuldig found sickening. It's getting hard to see how there could be something of a happy ending to this story, but I will hope for one anyway. I loved Yohji's strength of character as shown in his retained sense of humor. Well done, and please come back soon with more.
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Reviewed By: dimonyo-anghel On: February 26, 2005 21:43 CST
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whats brad doing to hot and totally cool yohji!??! and yay go nagi yohji friendship!
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2005 15:40 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful story! I love the way Yohji's sense of humor even in the midst of all the terrible things happening to him. Once again, Nagi's role as a confident works beautifully, and it was great learning quite unexpected things about Yohji's past (although his intelligence was shown from time to time in the series). But a cliffhanger -- what the heck is Crawford doing to him now?! Who was it that Yohji killed, and her relationship to Aya (oh, how I fear)? I hope Aya and Weiss show up soon, Yohji is in great need of a rescue, and resolution with Aya. Please come back soon.
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Reviewed By: gothria [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2005 02:31 CST
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shit. yoji's having a really really fucking shitty time. i feel really bad for him. hope his good karma kicks in soon...and that you write more soon =^~=
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Reviewed By: dimonyp-anghel On: February 02, 2005 21:17 CST
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i love it!! who didnt yohji like anyway??
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2005 21:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yikes, poor Yohji and his gorgeous green eyes! Beautiful, touching chapter. Great, believable conversation between Yohji and Nagi. Please come back soon with more!
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Reviewed By: gothria [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2005 17:03 CST
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o.o...omg thats so sad! Aya's gonna find Yoji soo right? :bites farfie: bastard...! very good chapter. extatic u updated! :dances: write more! any chance of Aya kicking farfies ass? =^^= keep it up!
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2004 19:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job, but so many mysteries to be explained. Poor Yohji isn't the only one being tortured. Please hurry back soon with more, I'm anxious to learn the answers, hope for a rescue, and a way for Yohji to survive the mess into which he seems to have gotten himself.
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Reviewed By: babymar-mar On: November 13, 2004 13:12 CST
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i love it!! and what did yohji do to ran?? muhahaha this is soo kool!
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Reviewed By: evilkat [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2004 18:24 CDT
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Well, I know "Nanashi" means "no name" in Japanese. 'Fleisher' you've got me on, I don't know. Now, about your story it has a very interesting plot and I am eager to see where you are going with it. Update soon.
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