| "By Sightless Lightning" Reviews/Comments [ 31 ] |
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Reviewed By: ZaKai [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2005 19:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
Another great chapter. I hope you get the next chapter out soon. I'm in total suspence.
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Title: Impatient
Reviewed By: Kadaede (NSI) On: May 26, 2005 19:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As I have said before this is an awsome work but now I am going to say more. I think that you need to continue this as soon as possible. Will Al ever be okay? Will Ed forgive himself? Will Winry be the key? What is going to happen!!! Please let your faithfull readers know!!!
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Reviewed By: ccam3 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2005 23:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
*AL
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Title: it was werid, LIKE ME!!!
Reviewed By: ccam3 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2005 23:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's cool but u F**ked l up!!!!BAD!!!update soon!i want to kno how it end !i hope everything turns out ok.
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Kadaede NSI On: May 12, 2005 13:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue this wonderful work!
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Reviewed By: katiepatie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2005 17:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
an interesting story...i hope you'll continue writing as well as you have already.
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Reviewed By: ZaKai [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2005 14:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really a great story. I really enjoy your writing style and the emotion you put in the story is really well writen. I really hope you write more soon.
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Reviewed By: fei8000000 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2005 20:07 CST
Comment/Review:
please write more love the story but WHY WHY WHY did al have to become so stupid and why is he like a sex machine?
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Reviewed By: EveOfHell On: March 06, 2005 17:55 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the BEST FMA story I have read at all. I like your ideas, they're really creative and I can't stop reading it!!! anyway, keep it up, PLEASE UPDATE!!! LOVE YA!!!!
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Reviewed By: fei8000000 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2005 17:03 CST
Comment/Review:
great story and i think that you should definatly continue with it
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Title: Good Story
Reviewed By: SDI Hypervelocity [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2005 00:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story was good, I'm going on to the next chapter as I type. Good job!
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Reviewed By: sabaki On: January 25, 2005 10:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my god o_o... you are the best. I love you ;_; update, soon >_< *spasms and dies*
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Reviewed By: O...O On: January 11, 2005 03:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOLY O..........O OMG PLEEEAAAASSSEEE WRITE MORE!!!????? this story is making me cry but i love it so much ; ... ;
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Reviewed By: Tsuki no Kagami On: November 14, 2004 16:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...I almost broke down crying when Al wouldn't let go like that. Excellent is all I have to say. Pleeeeeeeeeeeease write more soon.
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Reviewed By: Anonymous Reader On: August 25, 2004 19:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm surely going to hell for this. Thank you for securing my way into eternal damnation.^^ But,in other news,I love you, cherish you, and worship the ground you walk on. Please, for my sanity, continue to update.
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