| "The Nephilim Complex" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Title: Boring!
Reviewed By: Street Shark [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2015 03:26 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm sorry to write a negative review, but this fic is too boring
(and unfinished). It's a simple re-writing of the original story
that do not add nothing and don't give us a single spine chillin.
Plus it lacks the Hentai parts that can have give this story a
boost.
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Reviewed By: the bastard On: March 29, 2005 19:37 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
C'mon dude, it's been more then three months since an update. I think it's about due time. ~The Bastard~
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Reviewed By: EVa fanatic On: January 26, 2005 10:30 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it! update soon!!!!
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Title: Fuckin' A
Reviewed By: Shanderson [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2005 11:14 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. Thats the only way to describe it. Wow. This is one of, if not the best Eva fanfic I have read. But I must say that it is a little wierd. I mean Shinji and Rei ... Rei being a clone of Yui ... Shinji's mom, and them making out. Heh, but I don't care, It's awesome. Keep 'em commin'! Shanderson
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Title: awesome
Reviewed By: Random Encounter On: January 18, 2005 05:52 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pretty damn awesome, I must say. But one thing was bugging me, you called it a psych-knife in the first chapter, if I'm not mistaken. It's called a Progressive or Prog Knife. Bitchin' story though, really brought out Asuka's bitchyness.
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Reviewed By: DrakeDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2005 18:31 PST
Comment/Review:
This is a great fic i hope you keep writing it, and I like how you keep going with the angels. I think its funny how each of the girls are trying to get him and are you going to have asuka get with shinji or have rei take him away from her. I kinda like them with they are all together, maybe if the resove there differences. i dont have any suggestions about how right now though.
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Reviewed By: dennisud [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2004 11:03 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well one of the best Eva stories of 2004, hope to see it grow in 2005. And from what I've read, with a handful of lines changed this would still be in FFN, so do that and you can get more reviews on that site. BTW a great view of Shinji's dilemma of liking both girls and still dealing with the Eva storyline while having to deal with his "Sister's" passing. Course come the dark times ahead and how his relationships with both Rei and Asuka will help or hurt them as they deal with the later and more destructive Angels. Finally IMHO I think both girls should end up with him in some sort of relationship. I've always ;ooledat them as a Trinity, as if all three united, nothing would be victorious against them together. "Lisa IMHO will be a big determining factor here. dennisud
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Title: Yay
Reviewed By: Ravenz2008 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2004 03:44 PST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I'm glad you updated! Once again nice work with the grammer and plot...but I hope Shinji nicely tells Rei off and goes for Asuka! hehe
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Reviewed By: Ravenz2008 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2004 00:14 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I seriously *need* more. This is one of the best Shinji/Asuka fics that I've ever read. Please update soon. ~Raven
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Reviewed By: Rubel [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2004 13:48 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it. Shinji is a little OOC but then his little sister is probably the cause of that. I like where the plot is going and I am interested in where the love triangle will end up. Very good job with the characterization. Can't wait for the next update.
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Title: truly great work
Reviewed By: avatar_dmd On: July 12, 2004 06:54 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must admit, when I first read the summary, I was a little weirded out, but after reading it, all I can say is keep up the good work. I've read a lot of fanfiction, but not much of it contains such a high quality of originality, character consistancy, and good writing. Although I have noticed a few spelling and grammar mistakes here and there, I am Australian, so they may not be mistakes in America (I assume you're American 'coz most people I've seen post are.) All in all, it's a very good read, and I can't wait to see where you'll take it from here.
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Reviewed By: jeffrey_dallas On: July 06, 2004 20:42 PDT
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Chapter 2 has font problems - please fix!
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Title: wow...
Reviewed By: InuSan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2004 21:40 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I... datz realli nice stuff!! Shinji and Asuka!!! Must continue... ::twitch::
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