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"Frozen Fear Of Love" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ]
 Reviewed By: dudekiller [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 10, 2006 10:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
i think this is a good start for a story. good job. please update soon.
 Reviewed By: MyogaM34 [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 24, 2004 20:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
CONTINUE!!!
 Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 03, 2004 22:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
It's not considered very good writing to give a profile upfront about the characters. As a writer, you should be able to figure out a way to get these things across in your writing. Also, try not to dump the information on the reader at one time. You should give it gradually as you go along. An exception is when a character in the story is receiving alot of information at one time. Like of a history, or a rundown of some kind of event. /////////////// Anyway, I'm kind of interested to see what you come up with. And again, profiles are not needed if you can write about your characters effectively.

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