"Strange and Unexpected Beginnings" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
Reviewed By: Anaki Of The Blood Wolves [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2005 20:38 CDT Comment/Review: wahhhh! it's so sad!!!!!! i love this fic, you should write a sequel or something!
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Reviewed By: shadow runner On: July 13, 2005 19:30 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: i love your story and i think you did a good job on the lemon;] keep writing and i will keep writing reviews;]
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Reviewed By: Darknesspirals (doesn't feel like logging in) On: July 10, 2005 17:39 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Don't worry, I rarely give anyone full points. *points to rating* I really like the first chapter so far. Can't wait to go read the rest. *snickers* Love how you have it constantly brought up that Youko is a sex fiend and have him completly self centered. *thinking of the last line about his tight ass* It's making me laugh. *eyes button* And now I'm off to read more! There's not any romance until she's older, I'm guessing... I hope... YEs?
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Title: You wildthang, you! Reviewed By: Teh Rin On: July 06, 2005 10:09 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Man. You rocked my world with this chapter. I loved all the nitty grittty details. especially when Youko told her she was a part of the action too.Should i be worried that my Onna had such good detail? hmm...of course not! I wish i could take up every character space until there was no room left. lol. i don't know if i could write 1500 words though. i might have missed it but...what was Youko looking for? A condom? lol. it just seems so funny to think of him looking for a condom. I don't know why...maybe it's just the sugar in my system taking affect. I wonder what the morning after will be like for poor no-longer-a-virgin Natsumi. Will she end up regretting it? I wouldn't...XD I hope you tell me secrets about what ur planning...if not..i'll just draw them out of you...cause I'm sneaky like that. well..I think that's all i can think of. I have approx 636 character left right now out of 1500. I hope you like my review as much as I love your story! Bai bai now!!!!!!!! luv Rin! (491 words left!)
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Title: -bows- Reviewed By: Eppy_dono [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2005 09:08 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Believe it or not, your story was the first one I ever read on this site, but I never got around too reviewing it 'cause...I'm a total moron and didn't know how at the time... ^^;;; Please don't kill me. -ducks from frying pan- By the way, in future chapters, BE NICE TO MY LORD AND MASTER KURONUE-SAMA!!! He's not really such an asshole. ^^ -huggles him- (Get off me onna!!) 0_o; -shrugs-
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Reviewed By: boooba On: June 07, 2005 19:09 CDT Comment/Review: kool story man i really like it!!! UPDATE SOON!!!
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Title: no title... Reviewed By: Blackfriday616 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2005 15:35 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: UPDATE GOD DANGIT!!!!!!! MUST READ!!!!!! DIEING EVER SO SLOWLY QUIT TORTURING ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kiwiwfruit [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2005 13:45 CDT Comment/Review: OHHHH...MY...GOSH!!! WHY DO YOU HAVE TO PUT IN THESE SCENECS?!?! SO MUCH EMOTION!!! I CANT TAKE IT!! IS SHE GOING TODIE??!?!? WIIL THEY THEY BOTH DIE AND MEET UP IN THE HUMAN WORLD AS yOUKO SHUUICHI AND THE KIT ANOTHER PERSON?!?!?! OH WEHN WILL THE TOUTURE END?!??!? plaese continue.
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Title: whoa!!! Reviewed By: moodswinger On: April 26, 2005 16:15 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: PLEASE update i neeeeeeeed 2 know what is gonna happen next PLEEEAAAASE i neeed to read your story it was the best one i have read so far so please update your fans are waiting!!!!
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Title: Street Fighter Reviewed By: ange34 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2005 19:11 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: kool story!! i reall really love it! you should update soon! ---Street Fighter
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Title: omg!! Reviewed By: annjielita On: March 10, 2005 15:57 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: wow i reall reallly llove your stories and i just read the last chapther you have poasted right now it was reversal. it was so sad and i nneed to know whats goning to happening next. so there you have it, my r&r
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Title: Update Reviewed By: hinageshichankyoko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2005 13:10 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Please Update!!!!!!! I love what do have been doing to your story. Kuronue a complete ass.. that is a different way to put him. Nice.
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Reviewed By: HIEI LOVERS [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2005 09:30 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Update update update please! Would you do it for your fans? Please update soon. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Ceese On: February 06, 2005 16:38 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: i love it! it was about time you updated! i was really bored with nothing to read. this made my day! i had to stop at the camp thing! it was....funy!!! she is naive. i hope you explain what she looks like when she gets older, man youko can get jealous. a guy should be after her! anyaway, update soon! Ja ne!
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Title: Awesome Reviewed By: HIEI LOVERS [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2005 09:56 CST Comment/Review: This story is tight. I hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: Kiwiwfruit [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2005 22:58 CST Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review: i really love it. korune is such a jerk. he needs to have some time with her. besides that it is awsome i cant wait when they raid and is that girl relly so powerful?!
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Reviewed By: Shinigami_chylde [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2005 13:12 CST Comment/Review: Interstin character desinge for her. Kuronue is amde out to be a complete ass...never heard that befor. I like the story! keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Kiwiwfruit [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2005 15:31 CST Comment/Review: theres something wrong with the last two chapters....their not there! you might have upload it again ASAP!
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Reviewed By: HIEI LOVERS [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2004 21:16 CST Comment/Review: This is a great story you wrote/typed. I hope I become a great writer and/or typer like you someday.And please update.
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Reviewed By: aru_kitsune On: December 05, 2004 16:13 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: um, why did you repeat most of the second chapter? thats the only thing that got me confused. great story! please update really soon!
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