Reviewed By:Roo626 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2004 20:25 CDT Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review: your story is pretty good and extatic and is also very good but write the lines closer cause it makes it seem too long. Also you're doing a good job on writing and if you're young you'll be great. FRom miguel (roo626's cousin) CALL ME.