| "Twilight of a Shadowed Past" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: asianruby [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2004 13:17 CST
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I can't wait till chapter 3! Another well-written chapter! Although, I have to say, I don't quite understand what the prologue has to do with the story. Does it all come in together later?
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Reviewed By: asianruby [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2004 15:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OK...this was a prologue? Holy, that was awesome and terrifically written. I love the way you express emotions in such great detail and your imagery is amazing as well! I can't believe you're going to follow up! But I know you will, and it will definitely be even better. Can't wait! I've been waiting for you to update for a while, and I'm never let down by each one of your new updates. Once again, I love your work!
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Title: amazing!!!
Reviewed By: Smittin Kittin. (not loged on) On: July 07, 2004 01:02 CDT
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I'm speachless! You wrote an epic in the prologue! I was enthrolled! I've never read a fan fic with such vivid emotional detail. I'm in awe, the way you used the battle seens as moments of reflection was amazing! The entire tale is breathtaking! I'm floored by the detailed insight into each character. I was mesmorized by the beuty in this bitter sweet tale of victory! I don't know why more haven't read your fic? I am anciously awating the next chap! I have a suspicion about where this is headed. Thank you for sharing such a fab fic! Smooches Smittin Kittin
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Reviewed By: XbpblondieX On: July 05, 2004 01:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i absolutely loved your fic!! keep on writing i'm dying to know what happened. this is the first time i have ever reviewed someone, so you can tell i really liked your fic. Fantastic job!! do you write books?? you should i've got some water works goin on here!
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2004 19:10 CDT
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Kami-sama. Gosh I just don't know where to begin. It was such an awesome story. I got a question why didn't Inu try to find the Tenseiga? You know the healing sword, it should work for him right? What all are the implications of this change? Does this mean all who died are still dead or does this mean they could be alive. Was the dream a sight into an alternate universe. Like he sees how things could have been or were in that universe? Like a spilting in quatium mechanics. Something about the string theory and such? Or is this her wish? I really don't know what to think. But Kami christ whatever this is awesome. Such a sad and unhappy ending. But god what a start. One chapter and I begging to find out what happens. Great work. Keep up the excellente work.
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