| "Predestination" Reviews/Comments [ 125 ] |
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Title: Hello!
Reviewed By: Crescent_Moon1021 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2018 16:45 PST
Comment/Review:
Hey!! OMG so I just had an itching to reread this today! I saw it
on MM and it said it was complete! I got soooooo excited. Then of
course I saw that it was the same amount of chapters as it was on
spark (Dokuga). I was heartbroken! Even after all these years I
love this story! I really hope that you do come back and give your
readers an ending!
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Reviewed By: bookwrm150 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2008 17:48 PDT
Comment/Review:
ummmm how is this finished?
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Reviewed By: bookwrm150 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2008 18:22 PDT
Comment/Review:
i really don't get it! HOW CAN THE STORY BE OVER IF IT JUST STOPS?!?!?!!? PLEASE CONTINUE. I NEED TO READ A GOOD STORY. AND this IS IT!!! please continue writing
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Reviewed By: avoria [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2008 22:41 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a wonderful story, and it is full of great ideas that are creative, as well. I would suggest posting it on a-single-spark.com (or sesskag.com since both work to send you to the same site) because that is a Sesshomaru/Kagome pairing site. Also, Dokuga.com is an up and coming Sess/Kag pairing site that has great potential. The only critisism of your story that I have is you should try to get a Beta Reader for your story to smooth out the minor details; beyond that, I loved it! Keep on writing!
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2008 09:03 PDT
Comment/Review:
OHHHHHHHHH WHY DID U STOP WRITING?!?!?!?!? the only reason i could make out is u lost ur computer PLEASE UPDATE SOON IM SOOOOOOOOOO HOOKED!
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Title: Predestination
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2007 10:19 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: breesasha [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2007 18:55 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update Please~ I really enjoy this Sess/Kag couple!
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Title: Are u?
Reviewed By: DAZ306 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2006 11:00 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Are going to write more?
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Title: update
Reviewed By: roseblade [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2006 19:14 PDT
Comment/Review:
update pleas
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Title: Kitty_girl
Reviewed By: kitty_girl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2005 18:14 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please you need to update this story soon because it is really good and should be finished. Do not keep it where it is at.Update it and finish it please.
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2005 01:59 PDT
Comment/Review:
Can we get an update, an author note, something!?!?!?!
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Title: UPDATE! UPDATE! hehe
Reviewed By: whit On: September 08, 2005 09:22 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW! this is a great story. you have to UPDATE this soon and fast. i love how sess is denying his feelings towards kags. i hope soon that he realizes what he feels. everytime i see this tory i check to see if theres more chappies. AND THERES NOT! BUT anwways just wanted to tell that you are doing an awesome job and to keep it up!
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Title: Chapter 23
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2005 19:20 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome. Update again soon. Can't wait to see what happens with everyone.
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Title: PLEASE UPDATE!
Reviewed By: StarOfMidnight [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2005 21:15 PDT
Comment/Review:
I love this story! Please update soon. Please!
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Reviewed By: celyse [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2005 17:39 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was such a good story!! Please continue writing it, now I want to know what happens!!
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