| "Predestination" Reviews/Comments [ 125 ] |
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Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2004 21:53 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwww....... keep up the good work !!!! ^_^ dam computer's am i right? oh well keep up the good work and update when ever you can this is just to good of a story just to stop reading now so keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!
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Title: A little garlic in my lemon?
Reviewed By: KennaS [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2004 13:33 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Let me start off by saying that I have followed your story and have been impressed. The story you write is clear and concise and you never fail to leave me wanting more…up until now. I do have to tell you this was a terrific chapter until the lemon. The use of the words "cock" "balls" and "pussy" cheapened it greatly for me. The sentence "Oh yes my Kagome I just need to show you how good you were and how much seeing you fight today made my cock burn for you.", literally made me cringe. Perhaps the use of the word body or desire would have seemed a little less…trashy, for lack of a better word. The use of those particular words in a romance, as well as a story written so well as this one, reduces it to nothing more than internet porn. On the other side of the coin, if you could find words to substitute for those, it would be the perfect ending to a great and well written chapter. Please don't think of this as a flame, because its not. I just would hate to see such a lovely and talented writer such as your self stoop to using smut terminology in such a romantic and loving scene. Keep the great work coming and what happened to InuYasha…didn't he come back injured to the castle with Arshes?
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Reviewed By: Hazeru. On: August 07, 2004 11:43 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Like always you never stop amazing me with your writing talent. Your great!!!!!!!!
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Title: Intanse
Reviewed By: blue_straberry [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2004 11:28 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
BLODLY HELLL THAT WAS INTANSE!!!!!!!!! I love Sessho *o* Obsession!! Uhhhhhhhhh Up date soon that was Good!!!!
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Reviewed By: yumemiru (Amanda) On: August 02, 2004 14:54 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: Aitu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2004 09:29 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Another great chapter! Actually, any chapter that you write is a great chapter. I love how everything you write is so alive. So sorry I haven't reviewed for the last few chapters; I just wanted to let you know that I loved and appreciate those just as much as the rest of them. You seem so knowledgeable in so many areas; I like that in an author. It makes the story more beleiveable. I loved how Sesshoumaru was acting towards Kagome, hehehe. And the classical music choices, haha, perfect. I was wondering if we could all view these pieces of art that the person, sorry, I forgot who) made? Well, congrats on another wonderfully amazing chapter and I cannot wait to read more. ps- I love the name Isabella, such a beautiful name. --Autumn
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Reviewed By: hrc [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2004 17:20 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey good story but you spelled miroku wronge so i just thought you should no ok but great story wirte more soon thxs!!!
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Reviewed By: shymiko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2004 07:09 PDT
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OMG I love your story!!! Hehe Kagome kicks ass *grins widely* Please update soon ^.^ Shy
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Reviewed By: Hazeru [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2004 17:09 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Kagome, Sesshomaru isn't going to let her off that easily! LOL Can't praise your story enough, IT'S AWSOME! Update Soon.....please
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Title: Nice
Reviewed By: Kurai eclipse of evanescense [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2004 06:02 PDT
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This is such a great fic. Plz continue... I can't wait 2 find out wut happenz next!!
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Title: wow it's just a wow moment!!
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn (not logen in yet) On: July 27, 2004 22:52 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omfg Sesshy was PISSED!!!!!!!!! lol taht was really funny and good thought kee up the good work update soon please? again i'll give u a COOKIE!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: na On: July 27, 2004 22:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I found it to be enjoyable and it kept me involved. Normally longer fanfics become exceedingly boring, but this one did not! I hope to see the ending soon.
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Title: realistic reveiwer
Reviewed By: wazardmon On: July 27, 2004 19:54 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
great but theres a couple errors that were hard to read past. overall: i liked your story very much.
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Reviewed By: ThatsMsDiva2U [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2004 16:05 PDT
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I haven't read this story in such a long time. Naraku is such a pervert, he makes my skin crawl. Will Kagome become pregnant with Sesshomaru's pup anytime soon?
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Title: Ohh My God
Reviewed By: blue_straberry [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2004 14:15 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That wasgooddddddd!!! Well I hope that you up date soon please. Uuuuuuh Sesshie is MAD I like it, Naraku sucksssss!!!
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