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Reviewed By: amoraluv On: October 25, 2004 11:30 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O my god that story rules keep up the good work
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Reviewed By: Miko no Tears and Aya [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2004 12:54 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Im sorry tio say i some how fell behind with teh updates to this story, but im glad i realized this and continued to read! Fantastic! I cant wait for the next chapter! and whgat you do to the characters is awesome, the emotion the tension, Great!
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Title: One of my favorite on-going stories!
Reviewed By: Kawaii Nai [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2004 11:28 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the idea of Kagome being youkai. I love how everything described. I'm able to picture the scenes in my head. This story is addictive! LOL! It's one of my favorite on-going stories!
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Title: dsafdfa GRRR
Reviewed By: Rhi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2004 03:14 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMFG! IF YOU DO NOT UPDATE SOON I AM GOING TO HAVE A HEART ATTACK! I mist tell you. Thi..is one of my ultime favorite fics.I just absolutly adore it and I want it too be completed very sooon!Your style of writing is totally awsome and is very unique to me.I cant tell you how much i enjoyed it.It was well over 10..over 20 dammit.lol. I mean you have to hurry up and update soon.Im going to die here.I still cant believe that was the chapter.Im so sad. You have like the best lemon scenes EVER! They are so great, and,just,soooo smooth and nice!Just your lemons are very great.They give off alot of detail also.Just how i like them too. ^____^ Im gonig to go see if you have any other stories to, Because id you do Ihope they are as good as this one.I don't find many very well written Kagome Sesshoumaru fanfictions. This one, is very special to me and i will always have track of it. Also if you have aol or AIM, I am at Eriyuki99 mmkies.Im UBER obsessed!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: damn
Reviewed By: tiger_gurl On: August 11, 2004 05:33 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I have to say this is one of the best fic I have ever read. That lemon was smooth!
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Reviewed By: Kuri-Chan On: August 09, 2004 16:37 PDT
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one of the best stories i've read so far.. *thumbs up* O_o;
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Reviewed By: Black_widow [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2004 13:37 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I found this story very VERY good. I love Sess/kags so i absolutly love this story. I wish that you would update though.... -ta.
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Reviewed By: musheesuh On: August 09, 2004 10:13 PDT
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aww, what a nice ending to sess being mad at kagome. great update, can't wait for the next. it's really cool how you can keep thrilling and exciting the readers with your story. =)
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Reviewed By: Noni On: August 08, 2004 18:59 PDT
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I love your fic!!! I noticed that one of the villagers in your story alost has the exact same name as me. Instead of Kanaye my name is Janaye.I was gonna wait till i was finished reading the next two chapters but it was so good i couldn't!
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Reviewed By: no one On: August 07, 2004 22:00 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story. i can't wait to read more. i'm wondering when is Echiro going to finally realize that his feelings for kagome is misplace and that keito is in love with him. keito need to knock some sense into him that kagome is off the market. anyways did i mention i love this story? i'm like so into it. awsome job. please update soon if you can. thank you
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Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2004 21:53 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwww....... keep up the good work !!!! ^_^ dam computer's am i right? oh well keep up the good work and update when ever you can this is just to good of a story just to stop reading now so keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!
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Title: A little garlic in my lemon?
Reviewed By: KennaS [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2004 13:33 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Let me start off by saying that I have followed your story and have been impressed. The story you write is clear and concise and you never fail to leave me wanting more…up until now. I do have to tell you this was a terrific chapter until the lemon. The use of the words "cock" "balls" and "pussy" cheapened it greatly for me. The sentence "Oh yes my Kagome I just need to show you how good you were and how much seeing you fight today made my cock burn for you.", literally made me cringe. Perhaps the use of the word body or desire would have seemed a little less…trashy, for lack of a better word. The use of those particular words in a romance, as well as a story written so well as this one, reduces it to nothing more than internet porn. On the other side of the coin, if you could find words to substitute for those, it would be the perfect ending to a great and well written chapter. Please don't think of this as a flame, because its not. I just would hate to see such a lovely and talented writer such as your self stoop to using smut terminology in such a romantic and loving scene. Keep the great work coming and what happened to InuYasha…didn't he come back injured to the castle with Arshes?
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Reviewed By: Hazeru. On: August 07, 2004 11:43 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Like always you never stop amazing me with your writing talent. Your great!!!!!!!!
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Title: Intanse
Reviewed By: blue_straberry [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2004 11:28 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
BLODLY HELLL THAT WAS INTANSE!!!!!!!!! I love Sessho *o* Obsession!! Uhhhhhhhhh Up date soon that was Good!!!!
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Reviewed By: yumemiru (Amanda) On: August 02, 2004 14:54 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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