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| "Danger in the Shadows" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] | Title: Yay!!! Update!
Reviewed By: chiyosama808 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2007 20:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am definately a huge fan of yours! I hope that you finish this story. It seems abandoned, but I really has a hold on me. Please update!
| Reviewed By: frapp freck [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2006 18:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaassssssssssssssssssssssseeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeee update i am begging you.
| Title: omg
Reviewed By: TimeTurnner [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2006 14:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg, this my favoret of your story's, you have to finish it. it's just plainly my fave media miner story. from: Time turnner 1 (there are 2 of us on timeturnner)
| Title: finish
Reviewed By: kagsrockstheworld On: July 16, 2005 18:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's reall good, like all your storys, you gotta finish one of em
| Reviewed By: Moonshadow14 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2004 23:13 CST
Comment/Review:
i'll be in your story! that cool that youre putting fans in your story.... anyway, the info Name: Mariah Makana age: 21 gender: female hair: really really frizzy (reaches out past shoulders), black with gold stripes, falls to back of knees eyes: amber/golden (black when very angry) skin: pale with black strips on wrist, elbow, shoulder, waist, neck, thigh, knee, ankle, and cheeks race: half demon (half tigerdemon half human) family: orphan, no siblings casual clothes: long, flowy, black pants, formfitting black shortsleeved shirt, no shoes formal clothes: long, flowy/swishy, formfitting sleeveless sapphireblue dress extra: large, teardrop-shaped ruby choker on a black ribbon; red garnet ring love intrest: Hiten grade: junior in college job: unemployed (lost job at bookstore for reading anime instead of working) gang job: getaway driver and/or thief demonic traits: tiger ears on top of head (like inuyasha's, except they are black, round, and have a white spot in the center) demonic abilities: conjure and control fire; can become invisible/undetectable to senses (sight, sound, smell, touch....) . . . anyway, if you need more people, ill get my friends to send in stuff... update soon!
| Reviewed By: Moonshadow14 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2004 00:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
i think one of our computers is messed up, because all of your storys that ive read say they were written on the same day, but the disclaimers say otherwise, and all the ones you said youd update read completed, and if i read everybody elses reviews, then some of them dont show up that i know you mentioned in your disclaimers... im confused. anyway, good story, yet again.. but please update! i hope we can fix da computers, but if we cant, i can always smash it to little bits. update soon please!
| Reviewed By: clutzoid On: July 07, 2004 04:48 CDT
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please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please keep going with this story
| Reviewed By: clutzoid On: July 07, 2004 04:48 CDT
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please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please keep going with this story
| Reviewed By: FoXy_hOtTiE [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2004 01:23 CDT
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okay you are good so keep it up and i personally think that religion is soo a big thing in storys 'cause religion is a big thing for me in my life ya know?so thanks for having the religion thing in there,for bein good at this.
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