| "The Prince and Princess Diaries" Reviews/Comments [ 153 ] |
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Title: chapter 6
Reviewed By: VenusLegacy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2005 12:43 EST
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ooh i like the way you portay Bulmas sense of loneliness and feelings of alienation in this chapter. I was surprised at Vegetas change of heart hmm i wonder why he's being nice all of a sudden, is it because Bulma actually stood up to him or does he have ulterior motives? I liked this line: 'They made her feel like such an imposter, and that was the worst thing she could feel right now. Her husband-to-be hated her, no one liked her, everyone thought she should be back home where she belonged, and...and...she could not take it anymore! All this turmoil inside just wanted out, wanted to burst upon whoever and whatever was in its way, and just...kill it.... ' really summed up her feelings at this moment
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2005 19:17 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I, Nan De Mo Chibi Otoko, here by crown you as one of the best story writers of our time..................................................where did you come up with that intriuging story, i have never read anything like it, i have only read 4 stories that i loved with this magnetude, Ward, by LavenderGoddessV who says we're too young to love, by Princess Panchii (on FF.net) a cop story, by FatherMcRoury and the story i just read by you, thanks for being one of those writers, you deserve an award for this one, although, I do wonder what happened to yamcha?
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Reviewed By: pyshoitic_hanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2005 12:03 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just read the story and it was awesome!I'll for sure read the sequel!Keep it up!Ja ne!
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Title: prince and princess diaries
Reviewed By: sally alane On: February 20, 2005 18:31 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEY! when i first started reading your story on ff.net i thoroughly enjoyed it. and then you and your stories disappeared and i freaked out. i just read when vegeta got sick in the prince and princess diaries and it was a horrible cliffhanger for me. that was over the summer. and then when i heard about mediaminer, i decided to look you up just to see on the off chance that you might write here. Low and behold, here you are! Yay! i finally got to finish your story today, and i want to tell you that i think you are a geat writer. so yeah, keep up the good work! if you write anything new, please inform me on my email account! lazypillbugs@hotmail.com
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Title: The King and Queen Diaries
Reviewed By: AnimeLoverVS [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2005 23:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been reading , I just haven't left a review.. So Sorry.I will go back and leave a review for all of them.. Is she pregnant...I thought Yarmcha was dead... up-date soon... Denise
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Reviewed By: Gotenfan18 On: February 08, 2005 23:10 EST
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I love this story! the ending was awesome! i can't wait to read the sequel ^_^ Here's the e-mail address...paulcanarsky@msn.com....you already have it but that's okay!
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Reviewed By: DBZ-FAN-JESS [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2005 21:03 EST
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ok so am a little behind but I'm excited to see what you cook up next
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Reviewed By: aiyana [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2005 08:25 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is splendid, captivating and written very well, I felt much emotion by reading it. I await the continuation impatiently!
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Title: The Prince and Princess Diaries
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2005 10:47 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh i'm so sorry to know that this story is over. and i can't wait for the sequal...great job i loved this story and i know i love the next...maria
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Reviewed By: trinamonkey and oninu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2005 15:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story was indeed a very excellent one. And I must say that I truly believe that the sequel will most likely have to do with the "evil" Lord Yamcha who believes he is destined to be with Bulma. Then there is Trunks, possibly Bra to think about. But I am very excited and can not wait for the next story to continue. Good job.
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Reviewed By: sk8turgurl On: February 03, 2005 14:58 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!! Vegeta finally got to be King! Thank you for the great story! Please let me know when the King and Queen Diaries starts!! sk8turgurl@hotmail.com
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Reviewed By: mela On: February 02, 2005 17:39 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the story was great!! perfect ending! yeah! and i will definitely read the sequel! =))) and i think vegeta-sei will need a new heir. ^^ can't wait to read your new story! keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: SORCERESSSFUJIN On: February 02, 2005 17:28 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
EXCELLENT!!! WONDERFUL!! MUST HAVE THE SEQUEL IMMEDIATLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: ErinBerin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2005 17:27 EST
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Yay!! It's been an absolutely wonderful ride, I can't wait for The King and Queen Diaries. Might we be introduced to a little Prince Trunks in the near future? Hahaha.
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Reviewed By: trina monkey [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2005 16:37 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is definately one of my favorites. THe whole concept was an eye catcher and how you wrote it was just amazing. this story is so good and I can't wait until the last chapter so please update soon.
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