| "The Prince and Princess Diaries" Reviews/Comments [ 153 ] |
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Reviewed By: rychefan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2013 11:35 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow what an awesome story i loved it great job now on to your next one |
Title: AMAZING
Reviewed By: d.skye On: February 19, 2012 15:50 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE IT. One of my favorites its different,action pack,you cry a little,laugh. All in this one story. PLEASE COME BACK FINSH THE SEQUEL |
Title: second time
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2011 16:05 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is my second time reading this story. I love the relationship you've created for b/v. From the slow build up of their feelings, to the undying love they had for each at the end of the story. This is one of my favorite b/v fics. I only hope that someday you will come back and finish the sequel. With a happy b/v reunion of course. Take care and congratulations on ur new bundle of joy. |
Title: love this story
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2011 14:45 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Honestly, you are an amazing writer. I am enjoying this story immensely. I can't wait to read your other stories. Welcome back:) |
Reviewed By: monstertree On: November 29, 2007 17:01 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
forgot to rate this one because i wanted to move onto the sequel so quickly! I read this in 4 or 5 hours and I didn't stop until I finished! It was so great!!! One of my favorites ever. Please continue writing the sequel, I can't wait to see what happens! Good job!
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Title: Love It !
Reviewed By: Trini421 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2006 22:19 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE IT I LOVE IT!! Keep up the good work! ^_^
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Reviewed By: chiku [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2006 09:21 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Brilliant, what more can i say, going to read the king/queen one now, i no i am not going to be dissapointed...
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Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2006 17:39 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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You know, I have to admit that I skipped over this story thinking it wouldn't be interesting. I was wrong and appologize. I like it. Although I had expect something more from Yamcha, I was happy at the turn of events with the virus and the cure. Nice job.
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Reviewed By: free-sprit not logged in On: September 25, 2005 08:06 EDT
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I just finnished chapter 7.. I really didn't know what to think! I mean, I couldn't picture Vegeta rape Bulma like that, But the again, who knows? He was a real bastard in his youth, acording to the books, I really didn't know what he would do! I'm sooo gald that they didn't do anything. Love the story, gtg, have to read more. :P
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Title: WOW!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Katherine On: May 12, 2005 20:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooh that was...uh...wow. i dont know how to describe it. man, i finished reading the whole thing in one day, that's how hooked i was. so its not over huh? yah i was wondering what the heck happened 2 yamcha. i bet hes gonna be in the sequel, huh? dang it was so sad when the queen died. i thought she would make it and then vegeta had to go and catch the virus and it made me cry until he was all better again. i truly enjoyed your story, it was wonderful. beatifully done ur an amazing author/writer. cant wait to read the sequel!!
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Reviewed By: maflo On: April 23, 2005 09:53 EDT
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GREAAT story!!! i just loved it!!! i sooo look forward to the sequel...please put me on ur mailing list and tell me when ur gonna start posting the sequel: maflo923@hotmail.com
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Title: chapter 16
Reviewed By: VenusLegacy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2005 17:17 EST
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i was so glad to see Bulma give Vegeta the beating of his life. He deserved it, he does not deserve her. I really don't even know if i want to see them two finally get together, the relationship of hate is so much more interesting at the moment. This line was kind of sinister: `"But you must be careful. You do not want to kill the poor boy." Bulma stilled at her words, surprising herself by saying, "Yes I do." ' I did not know Bulma's hatred ran so deep, but then again it is understandable, i eagerly await their next encounter. I wonder why Vegeta is so cold and heartless in the first place, even his father who you depicted as a callous tyrant in the first chapter managed to love Bulma like a daughter, and Vegeta's mother was a very kind-hearted woman, so what happened to Vegeta? There's no Freiza or slavery, or the destruction of his planet to explain his bitterness.
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Title: chapter 15 the Prince returns
Reviewed By: VenusLegacy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2005 16:54 EST
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That was a great entrance for Vegeta: `An angry hand reached out, grabbed her shoulder and ripped her away, a harsh reprimand reaching snarling lips. "How dare-" Bulma, the wrongful princess of Vegeta-sei, stared with appalled eyes at someone she had not seen in over four years. Vegeta.' I wonder how Vegeta and Bulma will change after this sombre event of the death of the Queen.
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Reviewed By: VenusLegacy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2005 16:40 EST
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This line seems a bit strange coming from Bulma: 'They started getting into technical terms that Bulma had never heard before, and soon her head was spinning and she was lost. The princess quickly bowed out and left them and the bustling science lab. She would let them do their own thing, while she did hers.' Bulma not salivating about science is like Vegeta saying fighting is boring, but then you hint at the fact that women are not expected to study the sciences but then they seem to be forbidden from fighting and that didn't stop Bulma. I thought that vegetesei was supposed to be more advanced than Bulmas home planet, which surprises me as to how Dr Briefs can figure out the cure to the virus when they haven't even mastered the light switch, and still use chamberpots.
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Title: VenusLegacy
Reviewed By: VenusLegacy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2005 15:22 EST
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I'm wondering if there is supposed to be something significant with Bulma getting injured again during sword play with Chichi, and by Chich's hands again. Is Chichi trying to tell us something or is Bulma just not that good at sword fighting. I remember you saying she got injured when she was younger when fighting with Chichi and thats why her parents forbid her from wielding a sword. Chapter 9 does not do justice to Bulma and Chichi's friendship, for Chi-chi just seems selfishly worried about herself: "What would I have done if...if I had killed her? What would have happened to me?" and: "I almost killed my best friend. I would have been hanged or worse-drawn and quartered. I could have been-" seems a bit self-centered. The fact that the saiyans are technologically advanced does add to the sense of Bulmas feeling of difference and estrangement, but it seems a bit odd that their main weapons are not advanced. For they use swords yet they have regen tanks and light bulbs.
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