Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2004 11:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like it so far. I really want to see where you take this story, so please don't make me sorry that I'm about to put it on my favorite list. Now the hard part of reviewing. Okay I have to say that you use the word crimson too much. It's in every chapter. Red, garnet, maroon, there are plenty of names for that color so try using a different one, please? Crimson really isn't that good at being a repeat discriptive word. What is "purty"? I think you meant "pretty much", but still it was fun to read that word for some reason. Sesshoumaru is ooc but it works in this story. So don't let anybody give you any crap over that. Kikyou, dead? Good, lets keep it that way. I hope you update soon.
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