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| "My Tourniquet" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2006 11:45 CDT
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WHAT WAS THAT!!!!!! A DREAM??? okay I guess that was a good dream then... however, I feel that the whole thing was a bit rushed, like you couldn't wait to get to certain parts of the story.... when that happens I write the main points of the part I really want to write about, because I know I'd forget it otherwise, and then go back and fill in the details of the other parts... it should fill out your writing a lot... just friendly advice, okay? no getting mad at me
| Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2005 16:40 CDT
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NOT IN WEEKS? what is going through your head woman? or man, I can never be too sure
| Reviewed By: CYOA Athrunxyou luver [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2004 01:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*is sobbing into a mountain of tissues* I'm crying damn it!!! You stupid person!!!! Now I'm all sad that Heero never got to propose to Duo!!! *sniffles* And I'll have to buy a new box of tissues to!!!! But that was an awsome story and the first one to make my heart ache. It was just so sad!!!! And I don't really hate you. *sniffles pathetically and blows nose* ~Kao
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