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| "Lingering Hearts" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: mess (fujinakaheero still not signed in) On: July 12, 2004 15:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey, I'm back from my camping trip and I have read your 4th chapter, it was good. It's good to see that you explained everything that was going on in the story not many people do. Anyways, I thought I would review your chapter cause I'm a nice person who has alot of time on her hands again since the camping trip is done. I hope to see more of your chapters soon. I'm looking forward to reading about Quatre's Christmas party ^-^ cause there's gonna be alot of interesting things going on there. Anyways I'm going to go write a chapter for one of my stories now, maybe even post one that i started to write over the weekend just cause it's fun and gives me something to do. Anyways keep up your good work and I'm sorry this review is long, it's just once I start talking I never shut up lol. SO ya looking forward to seeing your next chapter very soon. So ya anyways Ja Ne! Fujinakaheero or what I go by in the real world Mess.
| Reviewed By: fujinakaheero (not signed in) On: July 08, 2004 15:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! Good plot line so far, i'm looking forward to chapter 4 so i'll be waiting, anyways you've got things right in this story and it flows together as one and makes sense which is very good considering some people don't always do that but i do admit that even im like that sometimes to, this is a 1x2 story right? Anyways good story, kinda sad how they broke up though but i hope Heero and Duo go back to each other sometime in the chapters to come, I hope to see you update soon enough cause I'm looking forward to seeing what happens... than again even if you update tomorrow I'm gonna have to wait until i get back from my camping trip which I wont be back until monday... darn wel i'll add ya to my favorites than so i know you updated. Anyways I'll stop talking now and hey maybe you could update today... well I wish you would. Anyways Ja Ne! Fujinakaheero (not signed in)
| Reviewed By: turtle_fire On: July 06, 2004 02:32 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heero and Duo always belongs to each other! Oh yeah! Your story flows very well, and it is elegantly written. But why would Heero told Duo that he never wants him again? I hope some punishment is in line for Heero. Please put out your chapters soon!
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