| "Chibi Time" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: Hi.
Reviewed By: Al_the_stalker_extrordinaire [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2005 16:56 CST
Comment/Review:
I just want to say I don't mind the Spelling or grammar mistakes.I can also tell what's going on. It takes a good reader to like this stuff. We're not perfect people. I also would like to be a character. Her name should be Seeka. She is very depressed, and will sometimes cut herself. Black hair, Gray eyes. She wears tattered clothes and sticks to the shadows. She is independent. :( :):]
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Reviewed By: Tyler Durden2003 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2005 08:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 2 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
I could barley understand this fic. There isn't enough description for anyone to understanding what's happening. You should try to make the narrative clearer next time. Also I noticed a lot of punctuation mistakes, some of which were very amateurish. You should proof read your work in the future.
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Title: Bob the builder
Reviewed By: Ryou's Kitty On: July 06, 2004 11:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi.Rember me?Are you still working on ff.net?If not,I will jion over here instead.I have a new charcter just so you know. name:yoko kelly gender:girl eyes:red hair:black and blue age:same as Ryou hieght:look above clothes:Uh....A spongebob shirt,cute black flame shorts. If theres anything I forgot just tell me next chappie and I will tell it to you.
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