| "Worst Mission Ever" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: opps
Reviewed By: kit_Airiden [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2004 15:47 CDT
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opps sorry...any way I looove this story it's really cute who was talking to ? ????....I dunno but either way it was really cuteI do hope you continue!!!
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Title: This story is sooooocute
Reviewed By: kit_Airiden [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2004 15:43 CDT
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Reviewed By: kuramasfan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2004 11:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok that was good but like i said ooc on Hiei and it seems your making a paring on Kurama and Boton i mean no Kurama is mine .....sigh I LOVE HIM any way i like it keep it going
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Reviewed By: Reikka_Shinen [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2004 21:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey your grammer sucks. you need to work on quotation marks. but otherwise it was cute.
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Reviewed By: lilonna_eternity [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2004 16:04 CDT
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that waz cute keep writing ^_________^
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Reviewed By: Fe On: July 06, 2004 13:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
Umm, the grammer is a bit hard to follow. I guess I could say this to a lot of different people, but you should start a new paragraph when you switch speakers in dialogue. Looks good so far, keep writing.
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