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| "Howling at the Moon" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] | Reviewed By: lo On: May 31, 2007 19:50 CDT
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Use paragraphs!! I can't read this, it is a big block of stuff. You looked like you cared for the first chapter but this chapter...
| Reviewed By: lo On: May 31, 2007 18:17 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THat was fun. A little sappy but fun anyway. Nice job!
| Title: 'bout time!
Reviewed By: evilvixen [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2006 16:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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Girl! It was about time that ya writed sumting of YGO! I like it, Specialy this one. Me favority.Oh, and I hope ya guys win the thingy? o_0
| Reviewed By: silent_moonlight78 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2005 00:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome! i love your fics! they are so nice! You rock! Of course i love the SetoJou fics... Write MORE!!!
| Reviewed By: Injured Raven On: June 15, 2005 04:14 CDT
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That was great! I love werewolves and Seto/Jou so it kicks ass Bitch! ^_^
| Title: GO WHITE WOLF X-OVERS!!!!!!! (or is that white rose?)
Reviewed By: HappyDragon(had to swith comps) On: July 07, 2004 04:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes, we must have more stories from you. Consider yourself added to my favorites next chance I get. And I would like to see a continuation of this story too. Actually my sadistic side says you should cross "The Second Age" continuation with this. Ok I don't play much of VtM or Werewolf, but I know enough to know the two races dislike/hate each other. (Though I play Gangrel so I can use the excuse I know nothing because I was abandoned and found out that the Garou seem to have less of a problem with that clan. After playing a game of both I think I like Werewolf more, as I don't like politics or manipulating people.) So to my sadistic side it would be funny as hell to have Seth, Seto, Katsu, and Jou arguing over who gets to be in control to do what. But I digress and maybe it would be easier to keep the 2 fics separate, but that idea will always be at the back of my mind. Yet again I don't think I've seen this kind of x-over, but again I'm not complaining. Now all we need is a Changeling fic and I think you'll have covered the major races from that world. Also, for not betaing the story you had very few spelling/grammar errors. And if this came from an rp session, I want to know how to join your group! Check my look up for contact info, I really mean it. And as always, Good Luck with your future fics!
| Reviewed By: Saelbu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2004 01:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very interesting, I enjoyed it a lot. ^_^
| Title: please can we have some more?
Reviewed By: Sweet deily On: July 06, 2004 20:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*shudders* Dude, I hope you write some more for this, seriously, I like the look of this story a lot, and it's pretty good and *shiver of delight* I liked it a lot. You have such kinky hot sex scenes, and the build up is so believeable that... well, *motions to her jelly legs* eheh, that it disables quite a lot of motor functions. I don't even know if what I'm saying makes sense. Whatever, I would REALLY love more of this story, really truly!! Please!!!!! In the meantime I'll be reading your other recent story. *feral grin* I hope it's as good as this. But you've got pretty good work, so I can almost garuntee it. Thanks soooooo much for writing this, it was good. Not good, hot, very hot. MMooorrreeee!!!!!!!!
| Title: Really Nice
Reviewed By: Alraune [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2004 16:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked your story. The idea is very original, I never saw one like that before. And I don't know why no one reviewed it, because it worth a review. You did a nice work. *two thumbs up* Would you make a sequel of it? maybe , longer? Because you could a little bit more about Mokuba! :) Just some ideas... Anyway, good job again! Alraune
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