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| "The Second Age" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: firevega On: July 07, 2004 23:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
I loved that! It was so...wonderfully written. And I don't mean to be rude or anything but coming from you, it was a surprise. Not that your not a good writer; your awesome! But uh...mostly you just write shameless smut (in which makes you the coolest person in the wolrd cause your stories rock) but it was sooo detailed and just...wonderful. I LOVED Kezkel (I forgot how you spelled his name already) I just wanted to huggle him! Except when he was covered with blood and stuff...heh. He was too cute! There was blood, and humor, and drama, and death, and Seto being a vampire...whoo! What else can I see? This fic was fantastic and I loved it with all my black little heart. Goo you.
| Title: Woooooooooooowwwwwwwwww . . . . . .
Reviewed By: HappyDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2004 01:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, I've seen Vamp fics before, but not Masquerade crossovers. Nicely done, this is now amongst my favorites. I really like how you started it, with Seth not wanting to be kindred, it almost looked like he might have wanted to kill himself to keep from becoming a monster. Then once he started changing he was in a daze and not thinking right, after that he fed and, well the rest as they say is history. Speaking of which I like how you ended it too, though this sadly means there will be no more chapters. But how about a sequel, could we get one of those? I mean you did leave it open, what with the sealing of souls into items. Also I like that comment Seth made to Fenvang about humanity, nice touch. And I know that Kezkel is an OC, but you put so little description into him, and with what you do give of him, well lets just say I spent the whole fic thinking of him as Malick/Merick. And I laughed at the sarcophagi scene, got to keep that in mind if I ever do my vamp fic. Anyway, I urge you to write more on this, maybe pick up in the current time? I mean Ishizu/Isis did give Yami the Tusk, and Seto will get the rod soon, who's to say Jou can't get his hands on the necklace? That or Seth will innocently ask Yami to see it then put it around Jou's neck so Katsu would wake up. Whatever you do I will be waiting for more of your fics, and reading the ones you have already posted. Good Luck!
| Title: Napkin please?
Reviewed By: Sweetdeily [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2004 01:33 CDT
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Dude, you have some of the MOST arousing sex scenes this side of YGO. *leans back with a laugh* Although if I may say it, you play Vampire: Dark Ages too much. And I thought I had vampire obsession problems. Heh, I'd love to see where this goes when we come into present day. What'd happen to Krez? I've come to really like him as a character, he's so cute! Anyway, awesome story, I'm loving it for more than one reason, which is pretty good. Where do you get your sex-scenes from? They're so good. *hentai grin* Wrapping up, I hope you write more. Please? True, it's hard to decide between this and the werewolf story, but... I'd like to see more of both if possible. You are such a cool author! Please write more! Please! *wandering off for a shower now* Oh, as a bit of critism, watch your random capitals. ~_^
| Reviewed By: Saelbu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2004 01:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fanfic! ^_^
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