| "Whitewater" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Title: PLEASE WRITE MORE
Reviewed By: ObsessedInuyashaFan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2008 21:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
=/ i like the idea. please continue with it
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Reviewed By: ObsessedInuyashaFan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2008 06:55 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
continue....
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Title: This is the last time... I hope... lol
Reviewed By: Tora_chan259 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2007 05:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH!!!! One last thing!! You have your story posted as "Completed" So, unless you intended this story to be a One-shot, I hope that you will change the status.... *Which I hope you're going to!!!* Thank's AGAIN *hopefully for the last time today*, ~Tora *Sorry about the numerous reviews.... TT_TT;;;;*
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Reviewed By: Tora_chan259 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2007 05:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH! This story is fantastic! It has a kinda humor that you only see with all seriousness. (My favorite kind!!) Haha But I still stand by my previous statements, while you have a great story line and way of presenting, (though it would be helpful to label the flashbacks >////
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Reviewed By: Tora_chan259 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2007 05:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
I've noticed, (although I have not finnished reading *Wanted to say this while I still remember,*) that you have (atleast once) switched from I to she or her or something... Like first person to narrorator (spell?).... I don't know if you meant to do so but it took me a brief while to figure out what you were talking about, maybe I'm the only one but I figured that I'd give you the heads up... Other than that I'm sorry to say I can not yet give a more elaborate review seeing as I havn't finnished reading.... I'll try to leave another review after I finish (forgive me if it slips my mind... I swear it would not be intentional) Thank you for your time and patience with this review, ~Tora
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Title: good review
Reviewed By: Neko_Fangirl On: February 13, 2005 16:26 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really enjoyed the fic so far. I hope you continue with it. Id like to see what happens with Kagome and Inuyasha once she's set up in her cabin or whatever and they begin working. ^_^
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Reviewed By: kuso [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2004 15:01 CST
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I like it so far! Update! ;) Yeah, like I said, I like it so far. Funny stuff. And I understand the whole 'how can the pervert look so innocent' thing, lol.
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Title: Hay
Reviewed By: Chinina-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2004 16:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was good but like DepressedLilgirl said change they pov or make it without a pov but either way it'll be good. Keep writing
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Reviewed By: LoSt_gUrL8o8 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2004 22:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
wow...great story..and good cliff hanger tooh...hope u update soon...
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Reviewed By: DepressedLilgirl On: July 06, 2004 20:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
hmmmm, this is good. you just need to change the POV!!!!! update soon!!!!!!!!!!
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