"28 Days" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: sarsa On: September 18, 2004 10:23 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Wow, what a great story, I absolutly love the pairing, there just aren't enough 2x5 out there. The last chapter really shone, and showed great talent. My only complaint is that a little more backstory at the begining would have been helpful and I would've understood where they were and why/how they got there. You did explain it a little just more detail would've been nice. Overall great story, you should definatly write more like it.
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Title: AnimeDuneJediElf Reviewed By: AnimeDuneJediElf [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2004 15:23 CDT Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: That was great story! I especially liked the last line, what Duo said about the water heater, LOL! Great story! *|Mari|*
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Reviewed By: Pookey On: July 01, 2003 20:45 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: As you can see I didn't really mark down the spelling and grammar since I don't really believe in looking at that cause half the time they're not done on purpose.
I loved it. It was awesome... superbly written and was very funny at times (when Duo was mocking Wufei, hilarious) I can’t even suggest any criticism… OMG noooo my life is over….
Ahem, This is really great and I am surprised that you only got two reviews... Keep writing, it'll make ya even better. Later.
~ Pookey
P.S. there better be more! -.- |
Reviewed By: Bejita-ou [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2003 19:52 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10 Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review: pretty good fic. funny, and an interesting story. well-written. |
Reviewed By: Venus On: March 07, 2002 16:42 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This fic was so GGGRRRRREEAATTTTTTTTT I loved it. Wufei and Duo getting together in the end was wonderful. Duo dressed up as Relena and Relena dressed up as Duo LOL I can only imagine what they look like. That story was great I hope you write more fics soon. |