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| "I Got Game!" Reviews/Comments [ 35 ] | | Pages (3): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 ] | Reviewed By: Taylor Mercury On: September 02, 2004 03:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooh!!! You just HAD to leave it there, didn't ya?! had to had to! ackkkk!!! Now I'm all dying to know what Quatre does upon hearing all of that!!! and, BAD Quatre! He can't have feelings for Triton. Noooo. He's supposed to like Trowa. In the psycho I-hate-you way he seems to like him. Ah! Goodness, it was yummy when HE made the move towards Trowa. very yummy. Now thats what I'm talkin bout! hahaha ^_~ You know, I think thats one of the reasons I like this fic of yours so much, it isn't your typical 3x4 romance thing, its not the same old same old (which I still read anyway dammit, cause its 3x4) this is different! Original! Unique! And a look at the characters in a completely different way (god, I love this Trowa. I really do. I want him. Damn!) I liked how we got to see Trowa looking back on himself, how he used to be, poor guy, changed because of that nasty sounding Ralph! Though, I'm not gonna complain, cause Trowa in eyeliner is hot! (Don't know what Quatre's complaining about!) And the tournement is coming up! Woo! There you go, some more sporty action (which I quite like in this story to be honest). There'll be some more excitement! But, dammit, don't go all evil on me with this Triton Bloom idea! Silly Quatre. Maybe if he saw how Trowa USED to look sans-eyeliner and funny clothing, he'll decide he definitely likes him more. Cause, dammit, Trowa's much hotter and cooler than this Triton dude! Anyroad, as always, enjoyable chapter! Update soon! ~Myca
| Reviewed By: KawaiiJade [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2004 18:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh my god don't give up. I loved this story. I really want to read more. Please please write more. ^_^ I'm begging u....
| Reviewed By: TaylorMercury [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2004 02:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah! Don't lose interest in it! You don't know how sucked into this story I have become! Really! I don't know a thing about sports, don't give a damn about them really, but this, ah! its so interesting! haha. I LOVED that argument between Q & T! Don't ask me why, but I did. It was fun to see them arguing. and Trowa, haha, he's sick. Really. But so is Quatre in his basketball-obsessed ways! God, I love it when they're together, even if it isn't doing yummy stuff. It's such a nice change to see Quatre get really really angry! He's having troubles with the team! I knew he would. He's gonna have to realise that not everything in life is eassssy. haha, Prima Donna. There is probably SO much more I could say about this chapter! But I'm running out of characters, and time. Anyway, I really really hope you keep writing this story, I know what its like to lose interest, but this is much too good and much too original to just, leave unfinished! (and plus, I'm obsessed, it wouldn't do well for my health!) You're doing a wonderful job with this story, and I can't wait to read more of it, see how things turn out! I'm hoping Quatre will get better in 'that' department now that Trowa has informed him its like kissing a log. Not fun. Damn, do I love this story! I'm hoping for more! ~ Myca
| Reviewed By: TaylorMercury [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2004 18:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh DAMN!!! Now, was that ever yummy!!! ahhh, I'm still drooling over that wonderful, delicious, scene! You have succeeded in melting me into a pile of giggling, silly goo! Go you!!! And yay for me! I'm glad my review helped, if its reviews you need to keep you going (because I am SO hooked on this story now, you can't stop!) then I'll keep on reviewing! (I planned on it anyway!) So, Quatre made up his mind! Damn, he cant just USE Tro though, he'll HAVE to fall in love with him (how could he NOT?! Trowa's so hot!) And Quatre made the team! Woo! of course he did! Ooh, and we're discovering more of 'the incident' between Quatre & Jamie!!! Intriguing! I'm really liking how you're writing the characters, definitely different from the show, but in a GOOD way, as there's still elements of them there, but just, different, in this AU set up you have going. I can SO picture Trowa as some gothic obsesser. Oh god. Trowa in eyeliner! Some men look SO hot in eyeliner! *cough* freddie mercuryn *cough* and the other characters, I think I mentioned that before, but they're really well developed for originals! This is such a different and enjoyable story for me to read! I'm so glad you updated it, I was DYING for something interesting, ack, its so hard to find decent stories now days you know. Please, PLEASE keep this going! I love the way you're writing it, and where you're taking it! LEMONS!!! ahhh! you DID promise! yuuuum!!! ^_^ ~ Myca
| Reviewed By: TaylorMercury [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2004 02:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooh!!! I'm rather liking this you know! I'm not big on sports at all, know nothing about basketball, so I was a bit dubious about reading this, but it caught my attention, and now I'm hooked! You've managed to completely suck me into this story! I'm really enjoying it. the way you've written the characters is very interesting, I'd never imagined Quatre as the sporty type before, but thats not a bad thing at all! I love Trowa as an obsessed, artist goth! haha, oh god, he's written so well! I'd bee obsessed with HIM!!! Duo's an, interesting, character, its a shame right now he's all so mean to Quatre, and Heero to, but hey, this is an AU, and you've written this well, it's all with good reason. I really like your original characters as well, they're written so, vividly, I thought they might be real characters from something else! It's not often original characters are as well formed and realistic as yours. and the plot! Oh my, I'm so keen to find out more! This school sounds like a hell hole, with all the racism and violence going on, but I'm interested in seeing how Quatre fairs with the basketball team, and what happens with Duo and the other bullies. yeah, I'm stuck on how you write Trowa, haha, "twenty four useable hours in a day", damn, he IS obsessed, isn't it? But I love it! I really hope you'll update more of this soon, you've gotten me hooked, intrigued and dying to find out more! Excellent job! (and I REALLY wanna read 3x4 lemons!!! eeeee!!! ^_~) ~ Myca
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