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| "I Got Game!" Reviews/Comments [ 35 ] | | Pages (3): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 › » ] | Reviewed By: TaylorMercury [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2004 01:33 CDT
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You got both reviews? Thats weird, cause the first one didn't show up when I sent it O_o Oh well. You got an extra one for the amazingness of the chapter! ^_~ Now, these last two! Lordy lordy oh my! Drama!!! Damn, I was so damn scared when that cop pulled the gun on Quatre! I thought he was gonna bloody shoot! Eeee! Scared the life outta me, you know? But, ah, thank GOD that he didn't shoot! So relieved! Ramid is one helluva NASTY piece of work, isn't he? Shit, he's a really scary guy! That whole entire scene was so, dramatic and scary and, ah! You wrote it incredibly well, very suspenseful, and it just oozed nasty violence *shudders* I really enjoyed the last two chapters though, I'm glad that Trowa likes the place, and Quatre, besides the father episode, was happy back at home. And Rashid and Lana! haha, I like the way you write them. And they got found out! Haha, that was amusing. Poor guys. And your lemons! Oh lordy, they are all so wonderfully lemony! I didn't realise that once those two got started, they'd be at it that much! But I'm certainly not complaining, its all incredibly yummy and I'm enjoying those immensely! But, ack! Trowa got interrupted in confessing his love! When will he say it? What will Quatre say? Eeee, I can't wait for that! And going back to Darken, ahh, that should be interesting aswell, to see if anythings changed and just, well, interesting! As always, incredibly enjoyable past chapters! Don't keep me waiting too long! ^_^ ~ Myca
| Reviewed By: precognition74 On: September 29, 2004 01:15 CDT
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oh gosh, how is quatre supposed to play ball if he's sore? when they get back to darken. the lemon were nice though.
| Reviewed By: Me again [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2004 03:31 CDT
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Ah, I SWEAR I reviewed this yesterday! But it hasn't shown up. and I forget what I wrote *sweatdrop* Still . . . um . . . YAYness for the sex!!! *dances* twas yummy and just like Trowa, I can't wait until it gets to that phenomenal point!!! As usual this chapter contained your excellent writing skills, detailed description, and engaging dialogue. I'm very curious to see how this trip back home turns out, if people find out about Q & T, and peoples reactions, and all the stuff in general! This WAS a longer review originally, but since I forget what I wrote (as already said) I'll end this rambling. Ahh, weirdness O_o ~ Myca
| Reviewed By: Me again On: September 27, 2004 12:14 CDT
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Ahh, you know, I honestly, wow. Wow wow wow. YAAAY! *dances* god. I don't really know WHAT to say about this chapter! I enjoyed it thoroughly. More than thoroughly. Actually, I had thoughts about this chapter stuck in my head all day at college! hahaha. This continues with your usualy excellent writing, wonderful description, and engaging dialogue. Nothing lacking, nothing missing, nothing at ALL I can think to improve. And, oh, it was hot. So hot. Ahh. I can't WAIT until the sex, as Trowa thought, starts getting phenomenal. Ahh yes. And I also can't wait to find out further what happens with them back in Quatre's hometown! This will be very, very interesting indeed! You're going good, can't WAIT for more! ~ Myca
| Reviewed By: precognition74 On: September 27, 2004 02:01 CDT
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ouch! poor trowa, that's gotta hurt. hope the next lemon will be less painful, for whoever the bottom is. btw, was it a typo error? " Omae o Korosu." not " omake"
| Reviewed By: precognition74 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2004 05:07 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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ya sure update fast! poor Quatre... i think trowa actually WANTS to play ball! hehe
| Reviewed By: precognition74 On: September 24, 2004 08:49 CDT
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mabe trowa should join the basketball team? n wufei?
| Reviewed By: Taylor Mercury On: September 24, 2004 00:46 CDT
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Ack!!! Middie must DIE!!! Of course, Trowa won't DO anything with her now, will he. No. BUT she needs to learn her place!!! She can't have Trowa. I can sense though, that there's going to be more trouble rising from her arrival. The Triton bit at the beginning was different, and it was really interesting to get his thoughts and opinions on things, I didn't realise that he still liked Quatre. Of course, he can't have him though. Nope. This was a really good chaper! Quatre's jealous (teehee) and all that good stuff. And his thoughts there at the end, it just being comfort. haha, nooo, Quatre, you're in love! heehee. As always, this was incredibly well written, detailed, descriptive, your dialogue flowing and engaging. You already know that I'm looking forward to more! And, ooh, Duo's a 'closet homo'? Could the student he admires be Hiiro, by any chance? heehee. Anyroad, good stuff, as always! Loving this! And, ah, the deed is coming along sooner? Well get typing matey! Don't leave me hanging! ;) ~ Myca
| Reviewed By: Taylor Mercury On: September 21, 2004 01:24 CDT
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Hahaha, TREIZE!!! Oh god, that was so funny! I really wasn't expecting him to be the sex-ed teacher! hahaha. That was absolutely hilarious putting him in there! And yay, I'm glad you have loads more chapters planned! This story is so . . . so, ahh! I can't find an adjective worthy of it. And another yum you put in there! Woo!!! Best way to start my day off, I believe, reading yums! ^_^ Can't wait for more of this! Eee! What's Quatre's meanie father going to think and do when he hears about this? and when will the yum event happen? So many questions! Don't leave me hanging too long! ~ Myca
| Reviewed By: Taylor Mercury On: September 18, 2004 03:05 CDT
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*dies* Oh, you sure did hold up that promise of yours, didn't you?! Holy . . . I don't really know WHAT to say about all that, it was so, ahh, so very very hot and yummy. and when I say "very" I mean VERY! ahh. damn. I'm very happy to see Quatre isn't a log anymore, and doesn't mind so much about being touched. haha. damn. I'm still all giggly and "whoa" after reading that! You wrote it so well as well. And, ooh, Trowa's taking him home for Christmas? thats gonna be interesting, thats for sure! Can't wait to see how that goes! Infact, I just can't plain wait for ANYmore of this! I don't care how many more chapters you have left to go (lots hopefully!) I'm in on this one right till you finish it! This is good stuff. Better than good stuff. But, ooh, this last chapter was so damn hot! ~ Myca
| Reviewed By: Taylor Mercury On: September 14, 2004 01:41 CDT
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Ahh, the last two chapters have been fantastic! That party, holy, wow, that was not only incredibly dramatic, but very gripping reading! I was so worried about Quatre though! Poor guy! and so frustrated with Trowa for not listening! Ah, but this one, makes up for it! I can't believe Quatre didn't still feel ill or anything! Crazy! But, ah, they made up!!! *dances* I'm so happy! This was an excellent chapter I think, your dialogue was really good, really fit well with the both of them. I loved how they were joking around, relaxed, and so honest with each other. That's definitely a good sign! And, oh my, Trowa LOVES him! I'm really not overly surprised at that, but, still!!! Quatre's got some catching up to do! Now I'm curious as all hell to find out if Ramid is paying Ramos off, and what Felicia's gonna find out. Ah, this was a really good chapter though, I really enjoyed it! I can't wait for the next one, you're doing great!!! ~ Myca
| Title: Wow.....
Reviewed By: Gundam06serenity [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2004 15:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow...... i love Tro as a goth. it's just so...wow. and Quat being a moody little shit is sooooooo different! this is one of the best fanfics out there! you should sooooo update soon. do you post stuff on ff.net too?
| Reviewed By: Taylor Mercury On: September 10, 2004 03:06 CDT
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Oooh, no! Quatre finally finds Trowa, and, ack!!! Not good! This is breaking my heart, can't Trowa just listen? Can't Quatre just explain himself better? ahhh!!! this isn't fair. hahaha. damn, you were right, definitely more trouble in this chapter! It wasn't bad at all, either! I thought this was a fine, fine chapter! Extremely frustrating, but fine all the same! Yeah, Quatre's got an attitude. I'm hoping though, that he can get over the homesickness, or at least make more friends. that should help. And get Trowa back. Cause dammit, those two belong together! they do! I can't wait for more of this though! You've been churning them out really quickly, which is a blessing for me, I'm so hooked on this story by now! So please don't wait too long for the next chapter! hahaha, Spurt. thats such a suggestive word! ~ Myca
| Reviewed By: Taylor Mercury On: September 07, 2004 03:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
God, you updated quickly!!! Yay for you! You deserve some cookies. And, god, finally! We find out just what happened between Jamie and Quatre, and how! I hadn't realised that that was ALL they got to do before Quatre was sent away, I was thinking this was something that had, gone on for a bit longer between them. Wow, but Trowa doesn't know that! Quatre has to tell him! You're really bringing some good old drama into this, aren't you? BOTH exes now being in the area. Ralph sure was a prick and a half, wasn't he? I'm thinking Trowa looks much hotter NOW than he did when he was with Ralph. I really liked the interaction between Quatre and Trowa at the restaurant, the short lived, wonderful moment of them getting along. You know, I also liked how Quatre was when he was hanging out with Jamie, he seems really different then than he does now, he was a lot more relaxed and jokey. Now if he could be more like that around Trowa . . . You updated so quickly, so I'm lacking much to say in this review, other than how much I'm enjoying this, and how eager I now am to see what happens at the tournament, and how Quatre can make it up to Trowa (he better! or at least explain to the poor guy!) Ah, yes, one more thing: Quatre's hair is like Jake Gyllenhaals (sp?) thats, wrong. That hairdresser destroyed the goodness of Quatre's adorable hair! Goodness, I can't imagine it any differently. hahaha. Don't leave me hanging too long please! This is so great! ~ Myca
| Reviewed By: Taylor Mercury On: September 06, 2004 12:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another excellent chapter from you! Wonderful! God, I'm glad that the Quatre & Triton thing seems to be over! You don't know just how worried I was getting over that! I thought Triton was some kind of sleeze, I'm just happy Quatre doesn't like him anymore! And whoa, Trowa!!! My goodness! He changed! A LOT!!! and he REALLY told Quatre didn't he! God, I loved that. I prefer nice Trowa, but Quatre REALLY needed to be told like that! I only hope that Quatre actually listens to Trowa! You gonna keep him like that for long? It's kind of cool, in a disconcerting way. Ah, and that tournement is coming up! I'm wondering myself how Quatre's going to play, if the team will finally get along alright, and all that good stuff! You're right, high school, (or the English equivalent for me) is very very dramatic, and you've captured that all wonderfully in this so far! I'm glad you've got more chapters to come, cause frankly, I'm not wanting this fic to end anytime soon, I'm enjoying myself so much reading this! Its originality, your depth of writing, your dialogue (god your dialogue between characters is GOOD!) this is going along excellently! You don't realise how enjoyable this is to read! Seriously! I cant wait for you to update this! (and the lemons! ah! them too! at least a Q&T one! heehee). Keep this going! For my own (un)sanity! ^_^ ~ Myca
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