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| "I Got Game!" Reviews/Comments [ 35 ] | | Pages (3): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 ] | Reviewed By: precognition74 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2004 05:07 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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ya sure update fast! poor Quatre... i think trowa actually WANTS to play ball! hehe
| Reviewed By: precognition74 On: September 24, 2004 08:49 CDT
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mabe trowa should join the basketball team? n wufei?
| Reviewed By: Taylor Mercury On: September 24, 2004 00:46 CDT
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Ack!!! Middie must DIE!!! Of course, Trowa won't DO anything with her now, will he. No. BUT she needs to learn her place!!! She can't have Trowa. I can sense though, that there's going to be more trouble rising from her arrival. The Triton bit at the beginning was different, and it was really interesting to get his thoughts and opinions on things, I didn't realise that he still liked Quatre. Of course, he can't have him though. Nope. This was a really good chaper! Quatre's jealous (teehee) and all that good stuff. And his thoughts there at the end, it just being comfort. haha, nooo, Quatre, you're in love! heehee. As always, this was incredibly well written, detailed, descriptive, your dialogue flowing and engaging. You already know that I'm looking forward to more! And, ooh, Duo's a 'closet homo'? Could the student he admires be Hiiro, by any chance? heehee. Anyroad, good stuff, as always! Loving this! And, ah, the deed is coming along sooner? Well get typing matey! Don't leave me hanging! ;) ~ Myca
| Reviewed By: Taylor Mercury On: September 21, 2004 01:24 CDT
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Hahaha, TREIZE!!! Oh god, that was so funny! I really wasn't expecting him to be the sex-ed teacher! hahaha. That was absolutely hilarious putting him in there! And yay, I'm glad you have loads more chapters planned! This story is so . . . so, ahh! I can't find an adjective worthy of it. And another yum you put in there! Woo!!! Best way to start my day off, I believe, reading yums! ^_^ Can't wait for more of this! Eee! What's Quatre's meanie father going to think and do when he hears about this? and when will the yum event happen? So many questions! Don't leave me hanging too long! ~ Myca
| Reviewed By: Taylor Mercury On: September 18, 2004 03:05 CDT
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*dies* Oh, you sure did hold up that promise of yours, didn't you?! Holy . . . I don't really know WHAT to say about all that, it was so, ahh, so very very hot and yummy. and when I say "very" I mean VERY! ahh. damn. I'm very happy to see Quatre isn't a log anymore, and doesn't mind so much about being touched. haha. damn. I'm still all giggly and "whoa" after reading that! You wrote it so well as well. And, ooh, Trowa's taking him home for Christmas? thats gonna be interesting, thats for sure! Can't wait to see how that goes! Infact, I just can't plain wait for ANYmore of this! I don't care how many more chapters you have left to go (lots hopefully!) I'm in on this one right till you finish it! This is good stuff. Better than good stuff. But, ooh, this last chapter was so damn hot! ~ Myca
| Reviewed By: Taylor Mercury On: September 14, 2004 01:41 CDT
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Ahh, the last two chapters have been fantastic! That party, holy, wow, that was not only incredibly dramatic, but very gripping reading! I was so worried about Quatre though! Poor guy! and so frustrated with Trowa for not listening! Ah, but this one, makes up for it! I can't believe Quatre didn't still feel ill or anything! Crazy! But, ah, they made up!!! *dances* I'm so happy! This was an excellent chapter I think, your dialogue was really good, really fit well with the both of them. I loved how they were joking around, relaxed, and so honest with each other. That's definitely a good sign! And, oh my, Trowa LOVES him! I'm really not overly surprised at that, but, still!!! Quatre's got some catching up to do! Now I'm curious as all hell to find out if Ramid is paying Ramos off, and what Felicia's gonna find out. Ah, this was a really good chapter though, I really enjoyed it! I can't wait for the next one, you're doing great!!! ~ Myca
| Title: Wow.....
Reviewed By: Gundam06serenity [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2004 15:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow...... i love Tro as a goth. it's just so...wow. and Quat being a moody little shit is sooooooo different! this is one of the best fanfics out there! you should sooooo update soon. do you post stuff on ff.net too?
| Reviewed By: Taylor Mercury On: September 10, 2004 03:06 CDT
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Oooh, no! Quatre finally finds Trowa, and, ack!!! Not good! This is breaking my heart, can't Trowa just listen? Can't Quatre just explain himself better? ahhh!!! this isn't fair. hahaha. damn, you were right, definitely more trouble in this chapter! It wasn't bad at all, either! I thought this was a fine, fine chapter! Extremely frustrating, but fine all the same! Yeah, Quatre's got an attitude. I'm hoping though, that he can get over the homesickness, or at least make more friends. that should help. And get Trowa back. Cause dammit, those two belong together! they do! I can't wait for more of this though! You've been churning them out really quickly, which is a blessing for me, I'm so hooked on this story by now! So please don't wait too long for the next chapter! hahaha, Spurt. thats such a suggestive word! ~ Myca
| Reviewed By: Taylor Mercury On: September 07, 2004 03:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
God, you updated quickly!!! Yay for you! You deserve some cookies. And, god, finally! We find out just what happened between Jamie and Quatre, and how! I hadn't realised that that was ALL they got to do before Quatre was sent away, I was thinking this was something that had, gone on for a bit longer between them. Wow, but Trowa doesn't know that! Quatre has to tell him! You're really bringing some good old drama into this, aren't you? BOTH exes now being in the area. Ralph sure was a prick and a half, wasn't he? I'm thinking Trowa looks much hotter NOW than he did when he was with Ralph. I really liked the interaction between Quatre and Trowa at the restaurant, the short lived, wonderful moment of them getting along. You know, I also liked how Quatre was when he was hanging out with Jamie, he seems really different then than he does now, he was a lot more relaxed and jokey. Now if he could be more like that around Trowa . . . You updated so quickly, so I'm lacking much to say in this review, other than how much I'm enjoying this, and how eager I now am to see what happens at the tournament, and how Quatre can make it up to Trowa (he better! or at least explain to the poor guy!) Ah, yes, one more thing: Quatre's hair is like Jake Gyllenhaals (sp?) thats, wrong. That hairdresser destroyed the goodness of Quatre's adorable hair! Goodness, I can't imagine it any differently. hahaha. Don't leave me hanging too long please! This is so great! ~ Myca
| Reviewed By: Taylor Mercury On: September 06, 2004 12:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another excellent chapter from you! Wonderful! God, I'm glad that the Quatre & Triton thing seems to be over! You don't know just how worried I was getting over that! I thought Triton was some kind of sleeze, I'm just happy Quatre doesn't like him anymore! And whoa, Trowa!!! My goodness! He changed! A LOT!!! and he REALLY told Quatre didn't he! God, I loved that. I prefer nice Trowa, but Quatre REALLY needed to be told like that! I only hope that Quatre actually listens to Trowa! You gonna keep him like that for long? It's kind of cool, in a disconcerting way. Ah, and that tournement is coming up! I'm wondering myself how Quatre's going to play, if the team will finally get along alright, and all that good stuff! You're right, high school, (or the English equivalent for me) is very very dramatic, and you've captured that all wonderfully in this so far! I'm glad you've got more chapters to come, cause frankly, I'm not wanting this fic to end anytime soon, I'm enjoying myself so much reading this! Its originality, your depth of writing, your dialogue (god your dialogue between characters is GOOD!) this is going along excellently! You don't realise how enjoyable this is to read! Seriously! I cant wait for you to update this! (and the lemons! ah! them too! at least a Q&T one! heehee). Keep this going! For my own (un)sanity! ^_^ ~ Myca
| Reviewed By: Taylor Mercury On: September 02, 2004 03:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooh!!! You just HAD to leave it there, didn't ya?! had to had to! ackkkk!!! Now I'm all dying to know what Quatre does upon hearing all of that!!! and, BAD Quatre! He can't have feelings for Triton. Noooo. He's supposed to like Trowa. In the psycho I-hate-you way he seems to like him. Ah! Goodness, it was yummy when HE made the move towards Trowa. very yummy. Now thats what I'm talkin bout! hahaha ^_~ You know, I think thats one of the reasons I like this fic of yours so much, it isn't your typical 3x4 romance thing, its not the same old same old (which I still read anyway dammit, cause its 3x4) this is different! Original! Unique! And a look at the characters in a completely different way (god, I love this Trowa. I really do. I want him. Damn!) I liked how we got to see Trowa looking back on himself, how he used to be, poor guy, changed because of that nasty sounding Ralph! Though, I'm not gonna complain, cause Trowa in eyeliner is hot! (Don't know what Quatre's complaining about!) And the tournement is coming up! Woo! There you go, some more sporty action (which I quite like in this story to be honest). There'll be some more excitement! But, dammit, don't go all evil on me with this Triton Bloom idea! Silly Quatre. Maybe if he saw how Trowa USED to look sans-eyeliner and funny clothing, he'll decide he definitely likes him more. Cause, dammit, Trowa's much hotter and cooler than this Triton dude! Anyroad, as always, enjoyable chapter! Update soon! ~Myca
| Reviewed By: KawaiiJade [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2004 18:38 CDT
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Oh my god don't give up. I loved this story. I really want to read more. Please please write more. ^_^ I'm begging u....
| Reviewed By: TaylorMercury [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2004 02:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah! Don't lose interest in it! You don't know how sucked into this story I have become! Really! I don't know a thing about sports, don't give a damn about them really, but this, ah! its so interesting! haha. I LOVED that argument between Q & T! Don't ask me why, but I did. It was fun to see them arguing. and Trowa, haha, he's sick. Really. But so is Quatre in his basketball-obsessed ways! God, I love it when they're together, even if it isn't doing yummy stuff. It's such a nice change to see Quatre get really really angry! He's having troubles with the team! I knew he would. He's gonna have to realise that not everything in life is eassssy. haha, Prima Donna. There is probably SO much more I could say about this chapter! But I'm running out of characters, and time. Anyway, I really really hope you keep writing this story, I know what its like to lose interest, but this is much too good and much too original to just, leave unfinished! (and plus, I'm obsessed, it wouldn't do well for my health!) You're doing a wonderful job with this story, and I can't wait to read more of it, see how things turn out! I'm hoping Quatre will get better in 'that' department now that Trowa has informed him its like kissing a log. Not fun. Damn, do I love this story! I'm hoping for more! ~ Myca
| Reviewed By: TaylorMercury [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2004 18:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh DAMN!!! Now, was that ever yummy!!! ahhh, I'm still drooling over that wonderful, delicious, scene! You have succeeded in melting me into a pile of giggling, silly goo! Go you!!! And yay for me! I'm glad my review helped, if its reviews you need to keep you going (because I am SO hooked on this story now, you can't stop!) then I'll keep on reviewing! (I planned on it anyway!) So, Quatre made up his mind! Damn, he cant just USE Tro though, he'll HAVE to fall in love with him (how could he NOT?! Trowa's so hot!) And Quatre made the team! Woo! of course he did! Ooh, and we're discovering more of 'the incident' between Quatre & Jamie!!! Intriguing! I'm really liking how you're writing the characters, definitely different from the show, but in a GOOD way, as there's still elements of them there, but just, different, in this AU set up you have going. I can SO picture Trowa as some gothic obsesser. Oh god. Trowa in eyeliner! Some men look SO hot in eyeliner! *cough* freddie mercuryn *cough* and the other characters, I think I mentioned that before, but they're really well developed for originals! This is such a different and enjoyable story for me to read! I'm so glad you updated it, I was DYING for something interesting, ack, its so hard to find decent stories now days you know. Please, PLEASE keep this going! I love the way you're writing it, and where you're taking it! LEMONS!!! ahhh! you DID promise! yuuuum!!! ^_^ ~ Myca
| Reviewed By: TaylorMercury [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2004 02:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooh!!! I'm rather liking this you know! I'm not big on sports at all, know nothing about basketball, so I was a bit dubious about reading this, but it caught my attention, and now I'm hooked! You've managed to completely suck me into this story! I'm really enjoying it. the way you've written the characters is very interesting, I'd never imagined Quatre as the sporty type before, but thats not a bad thing at all! I love Trowa as an obsessed, artist goth! haha, oh god, he's written so well! I'd bee obsessed with HIM!!! Duo's an, interesting, character, its a shame right now he's all so mean to Quatre, and Heero to, but hey, this is an AU, and you've written this well, it's all with good reason. I really like your original characters as well, they're written so, vividly, I thought they might be real characters from something else! It's not often original characters are as well formed and realistic as yours. and the plot! Oh my, I'm so keen to find out more! This school sounds like a hell hole, with all the racism and violence going on, but I'm interested in seeing how Quatre fairs with the basketball team, and what happens with Duo and the other bullies. yeah, I'm stuck on how you write Trowa, haha, "twenty four useable hours in a day", damn, he IS obsessed, isn't it? But I love it! I really hope you'll update more of this soon, you've gotten me hooked, intrigued and dying to find out more! Excellent job! (and I REALLY wanna read 3x4 lemons!!! eeeee!!! ^_~) ~ Myca
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