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| "I Got Game!" Reviews/Comments [ 35 ] | | Pages (3): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 › » ] | Reviewed By: TaylorMercury [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2004 05:19 CDT
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Eeeeeeeeee! Oh my! FINALLY!!! and, Quatre admitted it first! I didn't ever expect that! Oh god. It's so wonderfully adorable! Aw!!! Dammit. I love those two. I'm so so damn happy they finally shared that with each other! *wipes away a tear* and I noticed how Quatre was getting more affectionate. I like that. God, it's so lovely. YAY!!! Though, Quatre's poor knee! Damn, that must hurt! As long as he can get it fixed. That was a really good game though, really exciting! Middie though, interfering again! Grrr! And trying to get Triton to help her. Gah! She needs to just go obsess on someone else dammit, cause Trowa belongs to Quatre and she can't have him! I'm glad you've still got awhile to go with this though, I adore long stories, especially good ones. I'm here reading this all the way along you know! Oh, damn, I'm so, I'm giggling here and all happy happy about them though, in love! Aw! Damn. It's so wonderful. Eeeee! I can't wait for more! ~ Myca
| Reviewed By: precognition74 On: October 05, 2004 05:07 CDT
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oh gosh, they're so darn sappy!!! well, i don't think this kind of thing (runours and stuff) happens much in asian 'high schools' or their equivilent. it's a more conservative society. but well, it's interesting to about it. makes life interesting i guess. and we don't really have these cheerleader types, hell, cheerleading is not even a commonly recognised ECA. and since ALL schools in singapore wear a uniform with more or less very strict rules on uniform, we can't really judge people by the clothes they wear, they're all the same right down o the shoes and bags... very few designs to choose from.
| Reviewed By: silentnight On: October 04, 2004 21:37 CDT
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give the guys a break!!!!!ley them be happy for a chapter 8-)
| Title: ugh
Reviewed By: plah On: October 04, 2004 17:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
gawd its either up or down with trowa and quatre...i say just get everyone who is causin shit in the gym and kick their ass. ya would think trowa and quatre would just say fuck it to everyone and be happy for once since they are suppose to be in love eesh!
| Reviewed By: TaylorMercury [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2004 14:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You DO love driving me crazy, dont you? hahaha. I was so happy because last chapter they made up, and now! Ack, rumours! Horrible, hideous, hideous rumours! Middie must PAY for this trouble and pain she is causing! Ack, you write her so damn well, as well. She's so incredibly irritating, it makes me wish she were real only so I could kick her scheming arse! I really liked this chapter though, it was really interesting seeing how the rumour was thought up, started, and how it spread, and evolved, as rumours always, evilly so, tend to do. And gosh, whats up with Triton? You've given us a little twist there with him, haven't you? Now this should certainly prove interesting. I hope, if we do find out more about that side to him though, it doesn't involve Quatre, not in a pained way anyway! I hate when he's hurt. Awww. hahaha. As always, this is so incredibly gripping, dramatic, and just plain, well, entertaining! I'm enjoying this story more than I think is healthy for me. Haha. But, ah, seriously. I love this! I hope things can be resolved though! God, you write such interesting original characters too. They're just as real as the GW guys, which is great because usually OC's are all, 2-D and, unrealistic. Go you! You get full marks in my book for this. Now don't leave me hanging too long to find out what happens next! Lordy, Trowa's mad. He really shouldn't be though, Quatre & Felicia! Seriously! ~ Myca
| Reviewed By: silentnight On: October 02, 2004 14:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love the way quatre and trowa are portrayed in this fic. it is so original. they seem more human and real in this fic than in any other i have read. i can't wait to see where they end up. good work
| Reviewed By: TaylorMercury [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2004 01:25 CDT
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Noooo, this is driving me crazy! Eeeee! This isn't fair, dammit? Quatre and Trowa HAVE to have it out, and talk, and make up! This is all so, dramatic, and, ack! Dammit, and Trowa kissed Middie back! Gaaah! Stupid boy. Stupid stupid boy. I want them to both just forget the damn girls, make up, and have phenomenal sex. Don't you? Haha, no, you being evil like this don't you? hehe ^_~ darnit. Course, this was a good chapter, not saying anythings wrong with it, but the current situation is so, frustrating! Gah! It's getting worse, and that isn't good! Not at all! They need to talk to each other. Really talk. And soon. Dammit, Middie pisses me off, haha. Goodness, this story is so, dramatic, and gripping. I think I like it too much. Please don't keep me waiting to long for the next chapter, I'm dying (as you should well know) to see what happens now, and for them to make up! ~ Myca
| Title: precognition74
Reviewed By: kagayaki-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2004 01:38 CDT
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eew! why would trowa do that for? i mean like quatre hasnt been very nice to him lately, but he's ought to be loyal to quatre. o4 needs some attitude adjustment though. when will heero, duo n wuffei com back out. they seem to have been MIA for quite a while. looking at felicia, i think trowa may be a lil' more talented at ball then he let on.
| Reviewed By: TaylorMercury [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2004 01:01 CDT
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KISSING?! Ok, *takes a deep breath* it MUST be because Middie pounced on Trowa, like she usually does, the annoying little thing, following him around. He wasn't expecting it, she caught him off his guard. Yes. Haha, I'm hoping I'm right and that he's not willingly doing that! Bad Trowa if he is! But, ah, another dramatic and wonderful chapter! I was SO relieved when Trowa came along to help Quatre, god that was hot of him though, being all, like that. Their argument though, now that makes me sad and frustrated. dammit, I just want Quatre to, do something nice, or something, so that they go back to talking to each other and having phenomenal sex! hehehe. I think I was nearly as surprised as Quatre was at Felicia's skill there, I didn't expect that at all, but it was very interesting to see, especially since we don't really know very much about her. You DO bring out your chapters quickly, so I hope the same is true for the next, because I'm gonna be pretty much dying to find out what happens next, and why the hell Middie thinks she can kiss Quatre's goth like that! ~ Myca
| Reviewed By: Princess2000204 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2004 23:26 CDT
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I absolutely LOVE this fic!!!!! I'm notmally not a 3x4 fan but this fic made me see Quatre in a different light. I also like how you brought in all of the different names from GW. I hope you plane on updating really really soon!!!!!
| Reviewed By: TaylorMercury [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2004 01:33 CDT
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You got both reviews? Thats weird, cause the first one didn't show up when I sent it O_o Oh well. You got an extra one for the amazingness of the chapter! ^_~ Now, these last two! Lordy lordy oh my! Drama!!! Damn, I was so damn scared when that cop pulled the gun on Quatre! I thought he was gonna bloody shoot! Eeee! Scared the life outta me, you know? But, ah, thank GOD that he didn't shoot! So relieved! Ramid is one helluva NASTY piece of work, isn't he? Shit, he's a really scary guy! That whole entire scene was so, dramatic and scary and, ah! You wrote it incredibly well, very suspenseful, and it just oozed nasty violence *shudders* I really enjoyed the last two chapters though, I'm glad that Trowa likes the place, and Quatre, besides the father episode, was happy back at home. And Rashid and Lana! haha, I like the way you write them. And they got found out! Haha, that was amusing. Poor guys. And your lemons! Oh lordy, they are all so wonderfully lemony! I didn't realise that once those two got started, they'd be at it that much! But I'm certainly not complaining, its all incredibly yummy and I'm enjoying those immensely! But, ack! Trowa got interrupted in confessing his love! When will he say it? What will Quatre say? Eeee, I can't wait for that! And going back to Darken, ahh, that should be interesting aswell, to see if anythings changed and just, well, interesting! As always, incredibly enjoyable past chapters! Don't keep me waiting too long! ^_^ ~ Myca
| Reviewed By: precognition74 On: September 29, 2004 01:15 CDT
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oh gosh, how is quatre supposed to play ball if he's sore? when they get back to darken. the lemon were nice though.
| Reviewed By: Me again [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2004 03:31 CDT
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Ah, I SWEAR I reviewed this yesterday! But it hasn't shown up. and I forget what I wrote *sweatdrop* Still . . . um . . . YAYness for the sex!!! *dances* twas yummy and just like Trowa, I can't wait until it gets to that phenomenal point!!! As usual this chapter contained your excellent writing skills, detailed description, and engaging dialogue. I'm very curious to see how this trip back home turns out, if people find out about Q & T, and peoples reactions, and all the stuff in general! This WAS a longer review originally, but since I forget what I wrote (as already said) I'll end this rambling. Ahh, weirdness O_o ~ Myca
| Reviewed By: Me again On: September 27, 2004 12:14 CDT
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Ahh, you know, I honestly, wow. Wow wow wow. YAAAY! *dances* god. I don't really know WHAT to say about this chapter! I enjoyed it thoroughly. More than thoroughly. Actually, I had thoughts about this chapter stuck in my head all day at college! hahaha. This continues with your usualy excellent writing, wonderful description, and engaging dialogue. Nothing lacking, nothing missing, nothing at ALL I can think to improve. And, oh, it was hot. So hot. Ahh. I can't WAIT until the sex, as Trowa thought, starts getting phenomenal. Ahh yes. And I also can't wait to find out further what happens with them back in Quatre's hometown! This will be very, very interesting indeed! You're going good, can't WAIT for more! ~ Myca
| Reviewed By: precognition74 On: September 27, 2004 02:01 CDT
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ouch! poor trowa, that's gotta hurt. hope the next lemon will be less painful, for whoever the bottom is. btw, was it a typo error? " Omae o Korosu." not " omake"
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