| "Wings of Salvation" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: inulover16 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2006 12:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought that you brought the story to a great end. I happy that the Fathers were okay with the relationship. I love the story very much. I just think that it could have been longer. OH WELL GREAT FIC!
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Title: Wings of Salvation
Reviewed By: gravilove19 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2006 12:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy your fic and I hope you will write more soom
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Reviewed By: inulover16 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2006 02:58 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a great chapture update..a but short but i will take anything with this story..i'm really happy that both the boys and doing good..I was trying to firuge out the whole time before i read what the cure was, but i just could not figure it out though i had an idea like what it was...anyway i wish that this fic would go in forever b/c it is the more creative i have read and the best thus far..I hope that Chi. will be okay,,the reason being that in the story there are so many sick and he is only one angel with so much blood..ur poor sap muse, i do hope that they do survive..anyway i can't wait to see what will happen and please UPDATE SOON!!
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Reviewed By: inulover16 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2006 17:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please write more!!! I must find out what is going to happen and what is the cure for this strange thing killing all of these ppl..although i think that i know what it is i will not say...i just what to find out if i am right or not..so pleeeeease UPDATE SOON!!! ^.^
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Reviewed By: KAgs On: August 17, 2005 15:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please write more that was so good though it took me awhile to figure but ihope my guess was right . Yay for lemony goodness!!!
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Reviewed By: Aestrin [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2005 14:30 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i don't know much about the manga but i have seen the ova and i'm really enjoying this fic... it's very creative, especially how you added that twist in this chapter about kagetsuya.
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Reviewed By: M On: February 22, 2005 16:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it and it would be too sad if you did not finish it or update it
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Title: Prince/Angel
Reviewed By: Jahiya Kingie On: July 29, 2004 07:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! Again. Siver_Angel on Fanfiction.net. I love to review your stories. And I LOVE your 9th chap. Kawi *_*! So Love. Plz I need more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Love Ya*
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Title: KEEP GOING PLEASE
Reviewed By: birdy666 On: July 18, 2004 11:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very good fic. There are not to many Earthian fics out there. I'm giving a review so that you will please continue this story. I originally read the first two chapters on another site a year or so ago and thought then that this is a very good fic with the start of a good plot line and I do like the anime so hoped that it would be continued, kept checking back for updates but no good you never went past the two first chapters. I'm very glad that you have posted this fic here and that joy of joys you had added more chapters to boot. I really like how you write and you really do not make many spelling or grammar errors (but I'm not a english teacher so who am I to know if that or this sentance is proper grammer I just know it goes along smooth and is easy to read). I really love this fic so please update soon as you can I know Earthian is not a popular anime even back when it came out but a lot can be done with the charactors in a yoai setting if that is your cup of tea. So keep up the good work on this fic and please finish it no matter how long it takes you or how ever long it turns out to be. Don't rush the plot! So many times authors do that to fics,they start to rush the plot to end it because they think its getting to long. But hey to me a very GOOD story is never to long and this one is starting to look and read like a very good story so lash the muses to the head board at night . Update soon.
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