| "Desert Rose" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: alonegirl_34 (not logged in) On: July 28, 2005 17:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I swear to God, I will never be able to listen to "Desert Rose" with a straight face EVER AGAIN! Not that that's a bad thing of course. I love your lemons! They always seem to heat up the place ~_^ Keep on rockin!
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Reviewed By: SnowIce [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2005 19:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
*fans herself* Is it getting hot in here or is it just me...*snickers* What you'll be reading next are mu reasons for the ratings I gave you. There is also some constructive criticism written between my reasons. This is a really nice story. You have a very pleasant writing style, but I advise you to use a betareader. This is merely a suggestion. I just noticed a few missing words and some grammar mistakes. Nothing too bothering though. I liked the whole 'Yugi cleaning his room and Yami walking in catching Yugi' thing. I haven't read this idea before. The lemon was great, although I think Yugi's ass might have hurt like hell since they weren't any kind of lubrication. Maybe you forgot to write it or you simply didn't know about it or didn't care. But still...Very, very nice lemon. I think this about sums it up. I will be reading your other stories too as soon as I can and remember. *blush* I tend to forget things fairly easily...*huggles*
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Reviewed By: Miss Demonic One [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2005 07:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh My Freakin' God. I read this AT SCHOOL. And people were asking me if I was ok because I was all red and flushed. I REALLY like this. Keep writing Lemons. You are very good at them.
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Reviewed By: Kitsune Spyk [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2004 16:21 CST
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i was rereading this and i couldnt help but go awwww, so so very cute. ilove it
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Reviewed By: darkmageliz [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2004 20:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
**drools imagining Yuugi dancing so sexy** :D I love this fanfic as well as the other you wrote...heh...keep up the good writings...**adds to faves**
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Reviewed By: DragonRider00 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2004 00:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is so cute^^ Yugi and Yami are the best and not to mention hot!*Drools* But anyway, this fic is da bomb! and Gets a five star rating. I love the part where yami finds Yugi touching himself. I guess he isnt so innocent. And then Yami is telling Yugi about how he knows what he dreams about while he has his hands in yugi's pants,EEEE! So damn sexy! You sure do have a thing for writing lemons, keep up the good work^^ Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2004 17:26 CDT
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^_^ Yummy lemon, loved it. I'll have to look up that song, sounds cool. Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2004 00:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
Very good. Yummy lemon. I like the song you chose, it definitely fits.
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Reviewed By: Velvetina [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2004 15:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
Amazing work!
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Reviewed By: GemJewel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2004 12:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
wow.
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