| "The Other Half" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: RandS On: June 09, 2010 03:21 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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Love the "idea" of this fic and you really described it beautifully~ Seto as uke is definitely not something you see everyday; same with Ryou as seme, so that you did both and did it well was incredible. Just something that I noticed is you used "luscious" a few time too many, I think. I say this because it stood out to me, and I'm sure there are similar words that would work just as well.
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Reviewed By: Beysie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2004 23:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, intense! I loved it. Thanks so much for reading my story... it's amazing you were able to read it. There's some formatting problems I'm trying to sort out. Now I've found the rest of your stories, and am going through them all now! I think I must add you to my favorite authors list now! lol
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 18:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
Delicious hot lemon with two of my favorites: Seme!Ryou and Uke!Kaiba. Definitely one of my fav. lemon fics.
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Reviewed By: Shadow_Mistress not logged in On: July 07, 2004 23:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Marvelous lemony goodness. It's quite interesting to see Ryou as seme and Kaiba as uke. ^_^ I like how you write it smoothly and gently just as you describe it. Definitely great work. ^_^ Keep writing.
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