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| "Unexpected Relationships II" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Haisha-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2004 01:22 CST
Comment/Review:
This was a fantastic addition to the first fic! The ending was soo sweet and even though I'm not a big Naraku fan, the yaoi action was really hott!! I was a little disappointed with the lack of Miroku in this one, though. I was also very upset to find that you don't have any more InuYasha stories out there *pouts* I still want to see that I/K/M threesome idea. I really really hope to see more Inu-fics from you! Thanks for another great story!! ^_^
| Reviewed By: Youkai_Sesshoumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2004 01:33 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Dude! You got the idea from a fan art, didn't you? The scene in chapter 3 with the spanking XD I know, cause the dialog was the same too! I drew that picture. The irony in my finding this is actually kind of funny, don't you think? But any who, I liked it(why wouldn't I?) ^^
| Reviewed By: Kellie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2004 23:03 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm going to be honest about this. I really like your story. Really like it. But with Inuyasha and the other males in the story, it seems like Kagome is being left out. Is there any chance of a side story to go along with this for Kagome to get a little action with maybe Sango or someone? Because with all the yummy yaoi goodness, Poor Kagome is being left out. And since Inuyasha gets jealous if any male touches her, what about a female? So while Inuyasha is getting some lovin' from Miroku, how about Kagome.... I hope I don't hurt your feelings, thats not my intention because even though I don't read much Inuyasha Yaoi fics, this and the previous story stood out. I hope you continue to write since you are very good and I do look forward to reading more of your stories. Please continue ^__^
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