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| "Love Under The Strobe Light" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: sandry18 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2005 20:10 CST
Comment/Review:
excellent. i loved every min. of it. cant wait to see your next one. bye bye for now.
| Reviewed By: someone you'll never know On: August 09, 2004 19:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I did really like the story, just some of the grammer that got to me. I really did like it though. It was so very, very hot. Ohhh the little interlude between Hiei and Kurama Aye Carumba, I was very pleased. Keep it up.
| Title: Excellent!
Reviewed By: Yukisuke-ta [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2004 22:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Although i gave you an 8 compared to other I've read it is great but they only had a 3 or a 5 have you heard of Twitch Twitch? It is like a comparison to identical twins with a different personality! Fabulous detail! Keep writing, i encourage you, after all, my story sucks! I hope you write another one soon, I'd be happy to read it, and stuff, and the other stuff...I forgot what stuff, I just had my mind blocked, kinda a writer's block be sort of a reader's block, I read stories and don't update mine X_X I have a very small mob comming after me, no one reads mine cause it sucks, no one has reviewed and I am planning on deleting it, i have it pre-written and it just sucks! Anyways, I get off subject alot, well, Ta ta! I am planning on sticking around and read other stories, if you want to e-mail me my e-mail address is iceprincessdancer@yahoo.com, thanks for letting my eyes read a magnifficent story, for the last time I am saying good bye in this review, Lots of Love from Jackie/Yukisuke-ta (means ice skater cause i am an ice skater), bye and I'll be back *points finger to sky but falls off balance and tumbles to the floor* *waves* Bye
| Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2004 16:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
You do realize someone will try kill you for not updating your other stories. >_< That someone isn't going to be me though, since the lemon was just HOT. Everything was HOT. ^-^ I want to see Hiei and Kurama in their clubbing outfits! leather and fishnets= very happy me. How much did they drink, anyway? It must have been pretty strong, or they have can't take their alchohol. And how can Hiei NOT know who Gackt is? I haven't listened to a lot of songs (I know, I am a poor depraved child) and I know who he is. Ok, that's enough from me. All in all: Cool ficcy!
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