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Reviewed By: aikotakara [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2004 02:53 PDT
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wow... if i asnt for the fact that its 3 in the morning id be mad that there wasnt anymore chapters. this is definantly (cant spell :P)one of the really good ones. please please pleeeeaaaaassee continue this story and finish it! i want to see what happens!
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Reviewed By: InsaneAuthoress [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2004 19:36 PDT
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although the last chapter didn't end happily it left a cliff which is sometimes good. Bravo wonderful chapter! Im also amazed it was out so soon
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Reviewed By: Shadow Star 666 On: August 15, 2004 15:42 PDT
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Very cool chpater! i loved that update date! I can't wait for the next one. I hope it's soon! Ja mata!
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Reviewed By: Inuchan101 On: August 15, 2004 11:35 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All I have to say is, "Wow." This is an awesome story, and I can really see this happening where the manga leaves off. You are a talented writer, and I can't wait to hear more of this story! I actually cried during parts, and I don't do that very often. ^_~ (P.S. I couldn't stop laughing when I learned Dammit's name...hee hee! ^_^) Keep writing; I want to see what happens! If this were a book, it would surely be on my Favorites Shelf. *~Emma~*
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2004 22:13 PDT
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oOoOoOo i love this. yeay she remembered!!! lol i luv the dogs name. great work!
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: Inu_RebelBabe07 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2004 20:41 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! That is so cute! I love this story so much. You should become a author! I cant wait to see what else happens. Cuz you are so awesome!!!
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2004 18:44 PDT
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Great chapter. Keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: Inus_Kagome_Forever [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2004 17:08 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That ending was better than the last... i still feel bad for inu yasha...but hopefully, she get things worked out..i really like your story and hope you'll update soon again.
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(NSI) [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2004 16:59 PDT
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could i luv this story n e more than i do?? no i dont think its possible
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Reviewed By: wowzer On: August 14, 2004 16:44 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oo where might they go? and whats up w/ the dog? well write more soon! cant wait!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: powerful
Reviewed By: nan de mo chibi otoko On: August 14, 2004 16:01 PDT
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the past 2 chapters were very powerful wow
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Title: The Avalanche has begun ...
Reviewed By: Shadow Dancing On: August 14, 2004 14:29 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been really impressed with this story. It's not often I begin to express emotion after reading, but you've managed to make me shed tears during parts of this tale. That's an accomplishment in and of itself. This chapter finally explains why Shippo and Sesshomaru did not want Inuyasha to confront Kagome right away. Her memories are now coming back to her, but in a jumbled order. Without anything to organize these images in a linear order, her mind is slowly being torn apart by conflicts between the thoughts and feelings she had once and her mind as it is now. It will be interesting to see how she deals with this and what Inuyasha does as a consequence. Keep up the good work. Although this chapter ends on a cliffhanger, and I usually hate cliffhangers, I love the suspense this one creates. I hope it lasts ...
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Title: Chapter 25
Reviewed By: Eleature (not logged in) On: August 14, 2004 08:52 PDT
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Wow! That was an angsty and heartbreaking twist. In this chapter, you've really managed to bring forth the concequences of Kagome's amnesia. I didn't really believe that there would be any harm done if Kagome got her memory back, but you've managed to change my view. Congratulations. For the first time I'm beginning to realise how much Kagome and Inuyasha have to work to bring their relationship back to what it once was. If it's even possible. Thanks for updating so soon and keep up the good work.
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Title: OMG
Reviewed By: bethie On: August 14, 2004 01:08 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG OMG OMG OMG UPDATE LOL I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH ITS FUCKIN 3 IN THE MORNING LOL AND I CANT STOP READING IT SO PLEASE PLEASE BE MERSIFUL AND UPDATE TOMORROW IF POSSIBLE PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!! I LOVE THIS STORY AND I LOVE U FOR WRITING IT SO GOD PLEASE UPDATE BETHIE(lunar_storm)
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Reviewed By: Haunt On: August 13, 2004 22:25 PDT
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Oh, oh, no...no...she's scared of him...oh my goodness. She...oh, poor Inu!! Kagome's scared of him! Oh my gosh...Update soon, I can't WAIT to see what happens!!!
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