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Reviewed By: little kagome On: July 15, 2004 16:44 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the story plz update it soon!!
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Title: great, but too short!
Reviewed By: kanayekisho(unlogged) On: July 14, 2004 21:49 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aaaah! that was really good, but it was so short! only like 3 paragraphs! suspence suspence suspence! update as soon as possible! great job, keep it up!!!!!! ^_________________^
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Title: evil!!!
Reviewed By: Kumaru [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2004 09:11 PDT
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(sniffles) why with the teaser???? why? Oh, and I loved the revision of the last chapter. It had me laughing, hee hee Oh, what happened to Koga? Is he gonna show up somewhere in here or did he die? Maru
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2004 07:30 PDT
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Inuyasha never did have patience. That was funny when he called Houjou by Kouga's name. Houjou needs to get a clue. Anyway, that was another great chapter. Thanks and I can't wait to read the next one!
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Reviewed By: firedemon86(not signed on) On: July 14, 2004 07:17 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Come on not fair. Well your story is really great can wait to read my so. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!
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Title: great job!
Reviewed By: kanayekisho(unlogged in) On: July 14, 2004 01:17 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
in the words of tony the tiger- that chapter was grrrrrrrrreat! lol- keep it up, can't wait for the next chappie!
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Reviewed By: Lizzie1219 On: July 13, 2004 19:39 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an absolutely amazing story. The way you show that the characters have grown over the years (while still keeping them impeccably in character) is incredible. Your language makes me feel as if I'm actually experiencing the moments in the story-- and I have always believed that the mark of a great writer is the level of emotion she inspires within her reader. I can't wait to see you complete this story-- I feel even more anxious to know what happens with this than I do to know what happens on the show! I know that if I don't end up happy with the ending of the show/manga, I'll just replace it in my mind with yours! Brilliant work!
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Reviewed By: Van-Stolin On: July 13, 2004 18:54 PDT
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I really like this story, but there is just one things that I need to say. Inuyasha's name does not mean Female Dog Demon, it really means Supernatural Dog, the reason for this is that yasha wasn't used from the Japanesse language instead it was taken from Chinese and so it has this meaning. Oh and also, Inuyasha doesn't call Kagome a bitch in the sense of a female dog, he really uses it in the doragatory meaning. Well, I hope to see new chapters of this soon. Ja Ne.
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Reviewed By: tigirl On: July 13, 2004 11:00 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like your story. please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!0o0
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2004 18:59 PDT
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Wow! I really like how fast you are updating this story. I can't thank you enough. I hate it when authors make us wait for weeks for each chapter so your frequent updates are a real treat, and your story is wonderful. Thanks!
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Title: AWESUM!!
Reviewed By: kanayekisho [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2004 17:17 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you know what I am going to say so I will spare you the capslock and the whole histerics situation. uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuppppppppppppppppppddddddddddddddddddaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaatttttttttttttttttteeeeeeeeeee! great job!! keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Sesshoumarugrl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2004 15:40 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Soo good !! She saw his doggy ears !! Please let her remember soon !! PLEASE !!! lol UPDATE SOON !!
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Title: grrrrr
Reviewed By: Kumaru On: July 12, 2004 15:32 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHY??!?!??!? WHY SO SHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORT?!?!?!?! it was cute, but tiny!!!!!!!! Maru
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Reviewed By: bettychan On: July 12, 2004 13:50 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
She dumped Houjo? Don't you mean she dumped Kouga? I like this story and look forward to the next chapter.
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Title: WAI!!!!
Reviewed By: Kumaru On: July 12, 2004 12:53 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwwwwwww! Why did you stop? more! more!!!!! please, sueric, PLEASE!!!! I wanna finish!!! Kumaru Yeoman^^
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