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Reviewed By: musheesuh On: July 25, 2004 12:36 CDT
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aww. poor kag. =( your stories so good! I can't wait for the next chapter. this story is def worth everyone's time. =)
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Reviewed By: Shadowfoxdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2004 10:13 CDT
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CLIFFHANGERS ARE EVIL!!! ok enough of my tantrum. I loved your story it was awsome and i want to know whats going to happen next so as soon as you get the chance please update as soon as you can. I LOVED IT. Ja Ne
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Reviewed By: Miaya On: July 20, 2004 12:22 CDT
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Why do all authors have to end their stories in cliffhangers? Anyway, still trying to ignore the evilness that is cliffhangers, your story is great I hope you update soon!
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Title: I just had to break out the 10's again. If they could be 100's I would give them to you too!!!
Reviewed By: Aitu-- not signed in On: July 19, 2004 16:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
EEEeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!! That is me being eh-site-ed (Ricki Ricardo style) Good God I love this story! hehe. I went to FF.net to read the last part of chapter two and I was all *jaw drop to the floor with happiness and excitement* YEY!! He did propose! hehehe. Just love that guy, lol. And I adored the interactions between Inuyasha and Kagome-- soo funny! Your stories all have such good things going for them, and you are just so good with words. I love the action packed, cute lil romantic scenes all the same. You should win an oscar, an emmy, a golden globe, an espy, and what ever other award I forgot to mention that is out there. IT DOESN'T MATTER WHAT THE AWARD IS SUPPOSED TO BE FOR.. because I'm giving them all to you! =) I cannot wait until the next chapters come out! ---Your adoring fan, Autumn
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Reviewed By: musheesuh On: July 19, 2004 14:05 CDT
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nice updated! can't wait. =)
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Reviewed By: AcheronSlvrFyre On: July 12, 2004 20:14 CDT
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Hello. Is it my imagination or did you mean the last sentence of this chapter to cut off at "Flanking the"? Other than that, I like what you've written. It's been a while since I've read a good AU that takes place in the modern era.
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Reviewed By: musheesuh On: July 12, 2004 18:31 CDT
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updateeeeeee!
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Reviewed By: namichan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2004 03:44 CDT
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SESS and KAG!! WOOHOOO!! PLEASE update again. And the end of chapter two seems to be missing. i dont normally like AU fics, but i really like this!! yay!! finally found a worthy AU fic!! KEEP updating!!
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Reviewed By: Mademoiselle Morte [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2004 11:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MORE! please! I love it, never seen one like this before please update as soon as you can!
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Reviewed By: musheesuh On: July 10, 2004 23:19 CDT
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nice update! =)
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Title: CONFUZZLED
Reviewed By: lady le fay [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2004 22:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay...something is really weird...((NOT THE STORY! I LOVE THE STORY SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH!)) But what's weird is that chapter 2's cut off right after he looks at the diamond...maybe it's my computer but could you look into that? I really want to find out what happens! SESS/KAG FOREVER!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Aitu --- not signed in On: July 10, 2004 15:14 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I'm so happy that you updated this story! I love it! hehehe. Have I mentioned yet how interesting this plot is? Cuz it is! Just everything about this story is fantastic! I especially liked the description of when Sesshoumaru came home to find his dinner/the note/and Kagome waiting for him. It had the perfect combination of description. Not too little and it wasn't over kill like some people do. And eeeeeeee! A ring, hehehe. Can he purpose next chapter? hehehehehehe. I not-so-secretly hope so! I still love the time/date thing. It kinda reminds me of that tv showe 24, except I've never really seen that show but for some reason this story reminds me of that.. must be because of the time thing.. now if you could only include the time ticking sounds when people read the time/date thing. I can't wait to read more of this story, it's the bestest! (and so is your other one!) Keep up the amazing work! ---Aitu
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Reviewed By: Aitu-- not signed in On: July 07, 2004 23:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. That one single word can sum up all of my emotions effectively. Well what can I say, you've done it again! I was browsing through some stories and saw your name (since it is so eye catching and fun) and I was all =O (Surprised face) I would like to congratulate you on yet another story that is sure to be a huge success. I absolutly love it! The whole Sesshoumaru/CIA/Terrorism/even the little parts that tell the date and the time are amaingly fabulous! I cannot express how excited I am that you are writing another story! hehehe. Well you've made it onto my favorite author's list (Which is made of of three indivuduals including yourself)! I can't wait to see what will happen next and how you will incorporate the things from the Inyasha series into this story! Did I mention that I'm excited yet? haha --- keep up the great work, good luck with your stories, both fics and you own material-- I'm sure that you'll get them published if they are anything like what you write on here. I can't wait to read more chapters! Update soon please! (Both this story and the Final Bow) ((Geez, I'm demanding, huh?) --- your biggest fan ever! (haha) --Aitu
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Reviewed By: musheesuh On: July 07, 2004 22:40 CDT
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woah.nice story so far. =)
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Reviewed By: Kellie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2004 18:19 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good! And an original plot. I really like it ^__^
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