| "The Archangel" Reviews/Comments [ 88 ] |
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Reviewed By: Tessa-hime On: December 02, 2007 10:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please don't give up on this fic! You have us on the edge of our seats, so you can't just leave Kagome wandering around with a hideous virus that could wipe out the entire population. You've done such a wonderful job so far that it would be a shame to leave it now.
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Title: trujinx
Reviewed By: trujinx [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2007 00:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
Story is awesome but I think I'm missing the end to chapter 2 it doesn't talk of any proposal. What a shocker in chapter 3! LOL I was just wondering if anyone else had that problem or if it was just me. thanks bye mandalilsis@hotmail.com
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Reviewed By: Miaya On: May 02, 2007 00:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gosh. I've been keeping tabs on this story for a while. Please please finish it! .___. Perty please.=D
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Reviewed By: animeboysrock23 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2007 15:23 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
plz continue
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Reviewed By: kagome789 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2007 02:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THIS STORY IS SO INTENSEFYING,I LOV IT
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Title: The Archangel
Reviewed By: starfury3000 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2007 10:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so happy that another chapter came out!!!!!!!!!!! No disapointments here! I can't wait for you to keep going with your fic! this is one of my favs!!!!!!!!!!!! please keep going and let me tell you I can't wait for the next part!! so PlEASE HURRY!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: JazzyFay [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2007 07:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must admit, when I first came across this story, I didn't expect much. Still, I gave it a try and I'm now glad I did. You've woven a great plot and have written some of the best action scenes I've ever read in fanfic (I'm thinking of the dragon in the latest chapter in particular). I did notice a few minor grammatical mistakes, mainly with apostrophes ("moms" instead of "mom's" for example), but overall, the quality is far above and beyond the norm. I don't recall if you've mentioned a beta in your author notes, but if you don't already have one, or do and are still interested, my email is jazzy_fay1@yahoo.com. I'd be happy to go through the story and point out exactly where I've found mistakes (not that there were many). I look forward to seeing where you take the reader next. Keep up the good work. ~Jazzy
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Reviewed By: Nomina [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2007 03:43 CST
Comment/Review:
very interesting. I can't wait to see how Kagome makes Sess pay for not telling her sooner. Please update soon
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Title: waah!
Reviewed By: lasingparuparo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2007 23:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its so refreshing to read a story that has been spell-checked. thank you! I've been waiting for your update for a while so when i got the email i was so excited! i can't wait to see what will happen next! the story-line is great and i'm sure you have more surprises up your sleeve!
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Reviewed By: Azkis Killer [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2007 17:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey update please. Your killing me here with all the watin i have to do. e-mail me at anl2u@comcast.net if you want anything, like a betta or something. I like the story it has a great storyline and i like where it is going ^.^
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Reviewed By: Midnight Raven - [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2006 21:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awe! still an awesome story, but it's taking such a long time to upload. I know you must be busy, but we are starved and awaiting for your next chapter and so forth.
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Title: The Archangel
Reviewed By: starfury3000 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2006 09:17 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
would you PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS SSSEEEEEEEEE write the next part!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ! would ya could ya huh :) please!
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Title: The Archangel
Reviewed By: starfury3000 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2006 09:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well its about 2006 now and im still rereading your fanfic everytime i come on this site! are u going to continue with this? please e-mail me and let me know! I really hope that you do because this is a great fic and i think that you should really finish it!
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Title: The Archangel
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2006 13:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Title: T__T
Reviewed By: Winter's_Snow On: July 12, 2005 21:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! I've been keeping tabs on this fic for months and you haven't updated yet!! T__T It's not fair..I don't mean to hurry you, but I wanna know what happens!! Please!
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