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| "Assembly Instructions" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Title: heeheehee, i so loved it!
Reviewed By: fullmetalguitar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2005 05:47 CST
Comment/Review:
Near the end of the lemon scene I just thought, "How the hell did this start off again?" I got so distracted by all of the yummyness!! *squeal*
| Reviewed By: tsuonae On: January 21, 2005 13:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hihi! love the pouty ryo, so cute! anyway, do you think i could archive your fic? my site's gonna be up as soon as i get my ass movin', so you can tell me at gouka_jihi@yahoo.com
| Reviewed By: Alaskan Blue [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2004 23:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice, I would like to see more from you, this was very sweet and well written!
| Title: Excellent
Reviewed By: Ryoan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2004 12:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
At first I wasn't going to read this story. I mean hooking cables up for a DVD and Ryo coming to help out... But I got bored and clicked on it just to see what trouble and situation would happen. Figured if anything, I'd click out of it. NEVER JUDGE A BOOK BY THE COVER! I wound up reading, very interested in the story. Really liked the 'offense' Ryo took to Dee's words. Sometimes people don't really realize what they say, even offhandedly and not meaning anything by it. I liked the scoot away Ryo did, too. And the love scene, Excellent lemon write-up! ...Yummy Ryo and Dee scene!... very much believable! I like Dee wanting to see Ryo's expression in his eyes, wanting him to 'look' at him. The only thing... and I went back to make sure... unless I missed it twice(!) was that Ryo was shirtless and then you have Dee removing Ryo's shirt on the bed. It didn't ruin the story, I just noted that, but I loved the way you had they speak and things they did! Great, great job. Okay this is alot, but oh, well......
| Title: Nice...
Reviewed By: wildefyre [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2004 01:22 CDT
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This was very cute and yummy-iffic! I do believe that you're the first one to have Dee and Ryo using condoms... Nicely thought out! It was also nice that while you had Ryo acting shy he still held a little aggression within him. You did an awesome job with this. *Hands author a Nakesd Dee and Ryo lemon staute* Kudos on a wonderfully sweet and sexy fic!
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