| "Dreams" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: Re DREAMS
Reviewed By: crystel_dream On: December 09, 2004 10:51 CST
Comment/Review:
Darn. Very sorry. Called it by the wrong title which should be DREAMS not INNOCENT ASSASSIN. That's what you get for trying to do things like this when you're ill in bed with 'flu. Had a quick look and the rest of my previous review is just what I wanted to put. I just lost attention when typing in the title. Sorry. I was paying attention to what I was reading. Honest! *heads back under the covers sneezing and sniffling*
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Title: Innocent Assassin
Reviewed By: crystel_dream On: December 09, 2004 10:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Style of Writing 8. Good but rather stilted in places. Spelling and Grammar 6. Very good considering I don't think English is your first language. I spotted a couple of mistakes with spelling and the like so if you'd like an extra beta just let me know ok? Originality/ Creativity 9. Brilliant. Enjoyment Factor 10. I'm really enjoying this story despite the few mistakes with spelling and such. Overall Rating 10. PLEASE CONTINUE. This is turning out to be a brilliant story and I'd really like to see it continued.
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Reviewed By: Innocent_Assassin [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2004 08:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
Tis me again! And I wont stop reviewing coz this fic is worth it! *worship worship*
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Reviewed By: Innocent_Assassin [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2004 06:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
U've updated! YAY! *celebrates* LOVE this fic! X3
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Reviewed By: Tessa On: August 26, 2004 15:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
^__^ I looooooooove this!! It is really good, you must write more!! I'll be constantly checking up on this!! I LOVE this!! It's soooooo good!! Please write next chapter, but take your time!! A writer always needs time!! XD
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Reviewed By: Innocent_Assassin [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2004 05:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is interesting and the mystirious boy adds alot to this fic. Please update!
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