| "A Private Place" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: BulmaCanGetIt On: June 28, 2016 07:20 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I think you switched some of Bulma and Vegeta's personality traits.
Like, Bulma here is shy and actually worried about how people view
her but in canon, she shameless as fuck and proud of her
everything. Vegeta is proud and arrogant but HE IS A PRUDE. He's
always blushing around Bulma, which I find adorable. Mrs. Briefs
was awesome here! HAHAHA. She's so funny.
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Reviewed By: Geta-Baby [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2009 01:33 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok you've got me, you;re favorited. I've been up all night reading your B/V fics and this one has just made it impossible not to. I thought it'd be a cheesy one shot by the description honestly but I was definitely wrong. Loved it.
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Reviewed By: Cellar_Door [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2009 22:11 PDT
Comment/Review:
Never disappointed!
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Reviewed By: VampireGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2007 17:40 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fantastic! Loved every part, the development and the craziness. you definitly conveyed the sense of urgency and the awkwardness about finding a "private place". ^_- lol Extra points for creativity and originality!!***
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Title: Excellent
Reviewed By: StarbearerTM [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2007 19:44 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Vegeta's flirtatiousness was just right, not overdone, and not understated. I liked the interruptions they had to face, particularly the annoying woman looking for a 'father figure' for her boy Davy. I felt irritated for Bulma, so that shows you effectively conveyed that emotion. Of course I loved the lemon. The situation leading up to it was quite fun.
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Reviewed By: Mirai_shellie On: August 03, 2004 15:47 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic was pretty good. I really like most of your fics, because there is a lot of creativity that is put into the plot and the development of the character's personalities. The sex scenes are good, too!;D Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: me On: July 29, 2004 07:15 PDT
Comment/Review:
well i sure hope that you won the contest! that was a freakin' awsome fic!!!!! that was so cute at the end!!! hahaha, that poor boy....or the mother i should say since she has to explain what it is! LMAO! they are the perfect match, i sorta wish that they had a cat fight in the ocean, hahha, that would have been hilarious!
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2004 20:28 PDT
Comment/Review:
what fun. what sexy delightful sweetness and pure fun. lOVE Dr. and Mrs Briefs--sometimes I think Bulma's got the world's coolest parents! You definitely got your own style here, catgirl, and it's a treat to read your stuff!
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: July 09, 2004 01:49 PDT
Comment/Review:
Bloody great!!! nice to see something new from you.
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Reviewed By: jolanda On: July 08, 2004 22:59 PDT
Comment/Review:
nice story. i had read it somewhere else before, but it is nice you have put it on mediaminer, so other people can enjoy it too.
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