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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: July 25, 2004 00:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok not again ,Yep Sorry ^_~ I have to do this But I hade at least 20 different stories in my mail box and I wanted to read them all.....So I have to do a mass review Again...Like I think that sounds so inadequate ,impersonal,really not fare to you all..But I have only a short time now for story reading because my daughter is sick and I can only be away from her for so long or a short time...I know you all will understand...Ok now for my mass review... I have read all the or your story updates and have really enjoyed them and goddess knows these story's are really ,really,really great ..!!!!! I have read some of them to Jill my daughter (the one's that are rated R and under.Jill is 16) to occupy her time .. And she wants me to tell you all she likes them to...She cant wait till all of you update again ... I feel the same way to!!!...We want to encourage you all to keep writing and to keep updating..We thank all of you for writing the stories for our enjoyment ... So please all of you update again soon...If you see this same review on more than one updated chapter it is because all these chapters where in my in box today and I read them all at the same time and like I said this is a mass review ... so thanks again Patty and Jill
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: July 22, 2004 22:02 CDT
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Rating(s): Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I've been gone so I'm reading all these stories at one time so I'm doing a mass review...By the time I read and review all the stories you will have updated again .. But I want you to know I have read everyone's last chapter and enjoyed it...:) and cant wait until your next update!!!We went to Winnsboro,TX so I'm kinda behind on my stories and my reviews...But I will get caught up..And I can't wait to read more...So until next time ,If you keep writing I'll keep reading...Thank you for updating and keep up the great story telling.....
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Reviewed By: Schachzug On: July 20, 2004 00:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Riviting. I feel privledged to read this.
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Reviewed By: Cephalanthus [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2004 20:05 CDT
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*whimper* That just-- it-- wow. Um. More? Please? Soon?
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Reviewed By: Bane's Desire On: July 19, 2004 11:10 CDT
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Very intense. I devoured every word.
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: July 14, 2004 19:58 CDT
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Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I really,really loved this chapter..And wan't to read more !! So please update again soon...Each chapter keeps getting better and better...^_~ 0_~
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: July 14, 2004 19:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really,really loved this chapter..And wan't to read more !! So please update again soon...Each chapter keeps getting better and better...^_~ 0_~
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Reviewed By: footnotes On: July 13, 2004 17:12 CDT
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I agree with one of your other reviewers. Stories like this don't show up everyday and should be positively reviewed, but for some reason on this site people just don't so it. I've noticed that even other authors of GW fics seldom review each other's work. Is there a snobbery in this particular fanfiction? I've found poorly written stories with little storyline get numerous reviews only because they're romantically mushy. You, however, have kept me on the edge of my seat with this first-rate, angst-filled fic. Wufei is hard to understand, but I like him. You've made Duo seem like an uncaring ditz, but that's your prerogative. I'm looking forward to reading more.
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2004 14:32 CDT
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Where the heck are all the reviews for this fic? It's a remarkable story and you're doing a good job of delving into some of the horrors of PTSD. I really like this relationship you're building. Mariemeia is adorable in this fic; thanks for letting her be a kid. It's interesting that Heero's actually making more of an effort than Duo, at least that's what I perceive. This is a very good fic; I look forward to your next update!
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: July 12, 2004 15:52 CDT
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Rating(s): Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I know this review should be longer ..But I'm really in a hurry ,So I'll just say I red this chapter and really liked it and please update again soon so I can read more...Thank you for updating...
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: July 12, 2004 15:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know this review should be longer ..But I'm really in a hurry ,So I'll just say I red this chapter and really liked it and please update again soon so I can read more...Thank you for updating...
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Reviewed By: Dyna D On: July 12, 2004 13:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a fantastic story. I was snared the moment I began reading it. I don't know if someone could really survive what Wufei did; it makes him appear beyond human to even be alive. But his emotional reactions seemed correct, not only to what happened to him in Russia, but to his rejection by society and former comrades. Even a few typos couldn't distract from the overall storytelling. Thanks for the hours of chair-gripping reading.
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Reviewed By: Cephalanthus [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2004 20:31 CDT
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Wai! Please do continue this fic-- with all the lovely, lovely angst. I am captivated; I simply must read more. Brava.
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2004 23:24 CDT
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Wow - my heart's breaking for Wufei. This is a concept that I haven't read yet and it's promising to be another wonderful Lethanon fic. (I just hope it'll end on a happy note for him, not like Apathetic.) Trowa's revelation was pitiful, but I'm so glad he's acting on it. It's going to be interesting to see what kind of relationship Marie has in this fic. I like your portrayal of her - she and Wufei are definitely kindred spirits.
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Reviewed By: Fire of Phoenix On: July 09, 2004 13:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I felt Wufei's pain while I was reading this because I know how it feels to be ignored by ones friends. But I'm confused as to why Preventers moved Wufei down to sub-level 7 and why he's always given missions that no-one else knows about and why he has no paper work for his missions and that Wufei practically doesn't exist on the Preventer's database. I hope you update so I can understand what's happening to my solitary dragon.
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