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Reviewed By: A. Maria On: July 27, 2004 00:20 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This was wonderful. I really enjoied it. Reading it helped me figure somethings out, so thank you.
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 23:12 CDT
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I loved this fic! From the very beginning, where you introduced us to Wufei in his self-imposed exile, the story was riveting. The bond between him and Mariemeia made so much sense, and I absolutely love the Trowa/Wufei pairing. I like how you allowed the relationship to develop over time. I loved Trowa's "take charge" attitude; it seems that many times it's exactly what Wufei needed. I'm glad everyone was back together at the end, and even though Duo acted like a nutcase, he regretfully realized how hurtful his words and actions were. At the end, I had to sit back and wonder who it was exactly that needed the other the most? It's obvious that Wufei and Trowa both have grown throughout the fic. (Did I tell you I love the Trowa/Wurei pairing?) As much as Trowa was there for Wufei, I know that Wufei was also instrumental in helping Trowa recover from his own past and how he had neglected his friend. Thanks for another fantastic fic, Kiddo!
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Reviewed By: Bane's Desire On: July 25, 2004 17:56 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for many hours of wonderful reading entertainment. A fantastic fic altogether.
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Reviewed By: (^_^) SS. On: July 25, 2004 11:05 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I'm beaming. It's silly to say, but I'm so proud of you! That was *excellent.* I love the way you handled the museum and the ending: the quiet respect, the acceptance of the past, the poetic justice, and the strong love that will endure ....
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: July 25, 2004 10:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Comment/Review: Ok not again ,Yep Sorry ^_~ I have to do this But I hade at least 20 different stories in my mail box and I wanted to read them all.....So I have to do a mass review Again...Like I think that sounds so inadequate ,impersonal,really not fare to you all..But I have only a short time now for story reading because my daughter is sick and I can only be away from her for so long or a short time...I know you all will understand...Ok now for my mass review... I have read all the or your story updates and have really enjoyed them and goddess knows these story's are really ,really,really great ..!!!!! I have read some of them to Jill my daughter (the one's that are rated R and under.Jill is 16) to occupy her time .. And she wants me to tell you all she likes them to...She cant wait till all of you update again ... I feel the same way to!!!...We want to encourage you all to keep writing and to keep updating..We thank all of you for writing the stories for our enjoyment ... So please all of you update again soon...If you see this same review on more than one updated chapter it is because all these chapters where in my in box today and I read them all at the same time and like I said this is a mass review ... so thanks again Patty and Jill
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Reviewed By: Dyna D On: July 25, 2004 02:14 CDT
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You have a wonderful talent as a writer. This story started out as captivating and even this last chapter, that could have had so much more angst in the telling of Wufei's story to Quatre and Cathy, was touching instead. Perfect!
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: July 25, 2004 00:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok not again ,Yep Sorry ^_~ I have to do this But I hade at least 20 different stories in my mail box and I wanted to read them all.....So I have to do a mass review Again...Like I think that sounds so inadequate ,impersonal,really not fare to you all..But I have only a short time now for story reading because my daughter is sick and I can only be away from her for so long or a short time...I know you all will understand...Ok now for my mass review... I have read all the or your story updates and have really enjoyed them and goddess knows these story's are really ,really,really great ..!!!!! I have read some of them to Jill my daughter (the one's that are rated R and under.Jill is 16) to occupy her time .. And she wants me to tell you all she likes them to...She cant wait till all of you update again ... I feel the same way to!!!...We want to encourage you all to keep writing and to keep updating..We thank all of you for writing the stories for our enjoyment ... So please all of you update again soon...If you see this same review on more than one updated chapter it is because all these chapters where in my in box today and I read them all at the same time and like I said this is a mass review ... so thanks again Patty and Jill
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: July 22, 2004 22:02 CDT
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Rating(s): Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I've been gone so I'm reading all these stories at one time so I'm doing a mass review...By the time I read and review all the stories you will have updated again .. But I want you to know I have read everyone's last chapter and enjoyed it...:) and cant wait until your next update!!!We went to Winnsboro,TX so I'm kinda behind on my stories and my reviews...But I will get caught up..And I can't wait to read more...So until next time ,If you keep writing I'll keep reading...Thank you for updating and keep up the great story telling.....
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Reviewed By: Schachzug On: July 20, 2004 00:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Riviting. I feel privledged to read this.
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Reviewed By: Cephalanthus [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2004 20:05 CDT
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*whimper* That just-- it-- wow. Um. More? Please? Soon?
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Reviewed By: Bane's Desire On: July 19, 2004 11:10 CDT
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Very intense. I devoured every word.
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: July 14, 2004 19:58 CDT
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Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I really,really loved this chapter..And wan't to read more !! So please update again soon...Each chapter keeps getting better and better...^_~ 0_~
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: July 14, 2004 19:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really,really loved this chapter..And wan't to read more !! So please update again soon...Each chapter keeps getting better and better...^_~ 0_~
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Reviewed By: footnotes On: July 13, 2004 17:12 CDT
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I agree with one of your other reviewers. Stories like this don't show up everyday and should be positively reviewed, but for some reason on this site people just don't so it. I've noticed that even other authors of GW fics seldom review each other's work. Is there a snobbery in this particular fanfiction? I've found poorly written stories with little storyline get numerous reviews only because they're romantically mushy. You, however, have kept me on the edge of my seat with this first-rate, angst-filled fic. Wufei is hard to understand, but I like him. You've made Duo seem like an uncaring ditz, but that's your prerogative. I'm looking forward to reading more.
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2004 14:32 CDT
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Where the heck are all the reviews for this fic? It's a remarkable story and you're doing a good job of delving into some of the horrors of PTSD. I really like this relationship you're building. Mariemeia is adorable in this fic; thanks for letting her be a kid. It's interesting that Heero's actually making more of an effort than Duo, at least that's what I perceive. This is a very good fic; I look forward to your next update!
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