| "The Love for My Brother" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: drk_hikari [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2004 01:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey there! It's drk_hikari! n_n. I think that you could improve too. *nods* And like that other review ( I noticed that thwere's one done a day before this one..o_O), I don't mean to sound mean, but it's just that It could have been better. *shrugs* The idea of them too together is a good one though. n_n They are adorable! Anyways, keep writing!
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Title: Tee hee
Reviewed By: sesshomaru_is_hott [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2004 11:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
To tell the truth.. I really liked this. They're so cute together. ^^ Yay for twins.
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Title: jshadowcat90@yahoo.com
Reviewed By: joette On: August 23, 2004 10:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
personally i like incest and i don't really watch this show alot, but i think you could inprove, a lot. not to sound mean or anything but i don't think it was that good, but then again my friends and i are lemon experts. please email me and i'll be more than happy to teach you how to write a really godd lemon. ^_~
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Title: uuuhhhh
Reviewed By: HotsummerYami [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2004 21:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
uuuhh, well anyways. Koichi and Koji? That's noT right. But hey! It's cute! I love it!!! I've always wanted to read fanfic lke this! Twins having love! Yo rock! I think they make it as coupe. Even though they are brothers. but WHO CARES! LOVED IT!
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