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Reviewed By: White Wolf of the Moon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2006 19:34 CST
Comment/Review:
nice story. im always a late reviewer. i liked the fic because of alot of things. Ses and rin nice choice. not much more but thx for making a good fic
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Title: wow....loved it.
Reviewed By: bLuBeRRi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2005 10:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was soo cute. it was a really good take on rin and sesshomaru's relationship. I agree...not enough people look into their relationship. I think you did a great portrayal of their real feelings for eachother. It was a great story, keep writing.
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Title: AWW, they're so cute together
Reviewed By: Inus_Kagome_Forever [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2004 22:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn that was great! I've always loved Sess and Rin as a couple! Of course not as much as you, (you can tell by my name, lol. Hmm how would that sound, Shesshomarus_Rin_Forever, lol) anyways, it was great, i'll have to add you to my favorites so i can read more of your stories, hopefully you've made more inu yasha fics and other ones with animes i know of. Wonderful story, i originally read this story for a lemon which you didnt really have, but it was wonderful without one. Cant say enough how much i loved this story! You are obviously a great writer! Cheers to your story, lol Laters Inus_Kagome_Forever!
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Reviewed By: Supossed to be Hiei81 On: October 19, 2004 03:30 CDT
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I normally don't read S/R parings. But in this case i'll make an exception. It was AWSOME!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Dreaming_Sensations On: September 13, 2004 16:55 CDT
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Awwn so sweet and so cute! I loved it!
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Reviewed By: sango-chen [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 09:52 CDT
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*snif* that was...beautiful!!! *sobs into miroku's shoulder* miroku: *pats her back* it's okay...
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(NSI) On: August 02, 2004 23:40 CDT
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i think u did a great job with this fic
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Reviewed By: obsessivekawaiigurl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2004 21:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was really good i really enjoyed it
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Reviewed By: Bakani Banana [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2004 14:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice... I like the way you brought Sessy around to realizing how he feels. *thinks you did a better job than I did* Oh well, keep up the great writing!
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Reviewed By: shikon_priestess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2004 10:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...that was wonderful! I love Sess and Rin fics and this fic beats all of them it was so good, you're so talented^^ You seemed to keep all the characters the same way they act as in the show, just about. I hope to read more of your stories later on, keep up the wonderful work. Also good job with bringing in some characters such as Sango, I was expecting she'd be kinda old though, oh well...any ways you're a great writer!
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Reviewed By: Flamingo6584 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2004 16:55 CDT
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Very sweet story. I like stories where the characters are the least likely to get together, but end up together. Now that I have been over it with a fine tooth comb (hehe) I can tell you that it is very well written. A great deal of thought went into it and it shows.
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Reviewed By: wrathchylde [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2004 21:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aside from some problems with tense and minute spelling errors, this was a well written and very enjoyable fic. Bravo ^_^
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2004 13:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
Awwwww. This is a really good fic, kiddo! I suspect that Sesshoumaru could actually have these feelings for Rin after such a long time, and who wouldn't have feelings for such a hottie like him after just one second in his presence? I think you kept everyone IC too. Sesshoumaru's external demeanor was just as cool as he's depicted in the anime, like when he's dealing with Jaken. (I'm surprised that toady hasn't died a thousand times by now!) Inu Yasha's still as hot headed toward his brother even after all this time, and Kagome can still calm him down with her kind heart. I especially liked the happy ending. Great job!!!
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